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Squeal! I can't believe you reviewed my story (Protesting the Conflict in Iraq)... that totally made my day, because I am such a fan of this one...You're a great writer and very creative... I love the angst... though I'm soooo sad that Mokie cut his hair. Mokuba/Seto is my favorite pairing of all time, can't wait for more updates!

thanks everyone - you know you're great! i never expected that people would actually bother following this story, let alone be so nice about it! lucky, lucky me! sooooo, the next chappie should be up today or tomorrow... sunny, you have a point - do you think seto (at, what, 22? 23? years old) would be a bit parental? i mean he's been looking after mokuba (sort of) for most of his life, so i think he would be... if -my- little brother/sister dissapeared without a trace, -i'd- be upset and angry, and a bit parental... but also fucking relieved when s/he turned up. then again, seto and mokuba have that -thing- between them, which (as i'm sure all here agree) is not entirely brotherly!!! so maybe seto's trying -not- to act like he's in charge of mokuba... oh, btw, you said you wanted a happy ending - heehee! come off it! you LOVE the angst! =) i'm not giving anything away! see you soon guys, and thanks again!

Oh, and you're not blind - "Sleepless I" has not been posted here. It's a long one-shot, same pairing, written about Mokuba in some sort of institution... If you guys want, I'll post it, but it was the first YuGiOh fic I wrote, and it's ... well, not as good as this one. =)

Thanks for reading, reviewing etc. Thanks for the link. Thanks for following the link. THANK YOU ALL!!! Now... to serious business. The SETO QUESTION, i.e "What the fuck is he doing?"... Well, Mokuba is a missing person, ergo someone must have declared him missing. Given that Yugi seems to be in no state for doing such things, I would say there is a good chance that Seto is the culprit. Once again - in this version of this story, we don't get a lot of info about Seto because it's Mokuba's journey. BUT *wards off the howls of discontent!* BUT, since you're all so interested, I think I might write a short one-shot or drabble (mmm, I love drabbles) of what Seto is up to while Mokuba is on his quest... mission... thing. So, thanks again for reading etc... Here is chapter 9 (do I need to say, I'd love a review?!)... Very close to the end now - only a couple more chapters!

Disjointed? I call Mokuba's stream of consciousness *real*. I'm very impressed with how you've been writing Mokuba. But what about Seto? Surely, he's worried (or at least angry) that Mokuba's gone missing.
I'm a sucker for sweet endings. Of course, I want them to end up together. ^_^
To Praiseofshadows: Can I e-mail you about posting on locketpair? I don't see myself getting LJ in the near future.

Chapter 8 was awesome! Go for jerkingoff!Mokuba....he's so cute when he's psycho/tired...tee-hee. Best line in the whole thing: "Refuses to psychoanalyse the ramifications of jerking off over the image of his hot fucking sexy brother." Nice -- hope Seto catches up to him soon ;D. (BTW -- I was thinking I could put a link from locketpair to here? That way you would't have to worry about the slowness of your connection....let me know what you think =D)

I came here via your link on locket pair and gods, I love this story(I also liked the God drabble, that was really sweet), I don't know how I could miss this, seeing how I love Seto/Mokuba to bits...but oh my you made Mokuba cut his hair! AHHHHHHH, how will Seto react? Hell, what is with Seto anyway, don't get me wrong, I like how you write Mokuba but I would love to know if Seto is worried sick, or trying to compensate by working himself to death, or...Please tell me there is a happy ending, on Nedjem Netsuai there is so much angst these days, I need some happy stuff!

thanks thanks thanks! glad you are liking it... there are only a few more chapters to go. mokuba is still running/hiding. at about this point in the writing i really started to wonder how i would end it all (i.e. will they, won't they?)... so, i hope you're wondering too!!! yeah, i'd love a link - bring on the links!!! hope you're all well!

hi, thanks for reviewing again - i really appreciate it! regarding your issue with "adult" content... i -guess- you could post at fanfiction.com (*shudders slightly*)... it's not -all- bad, just a little all over the place. otherwise, just post it here along with your other stuff - stick a warning on it saying that it's not all that intense... surely you won't get kicked off just because your fic doesn't have enough sex in it?!?!?
anyway, since you were kind enough to review, i think another chapter is in order!!! *peers at others like a schoolteacher* remember: no reviews, no story!

I liked Mokuba saying something new every time he cut off another piece of hair. The scene in which an anonymous person seduced Mokuba made my heart hurt. As for the question you left in your review: I have some Seto/Mokuba ficlets, but I don't know where to post them. They aren't R or NC17 material, and I don't have LJ to join a community. So unless you, or someone else offers to post stuff, then ::shrugs::
We must think alike. There was a club scene in one of my ficlets, too. ^_~