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Excellent!

This is the first Mokuba angst story I've come across where he 'goes off the deep end'. And you keep him in character the whole time! Thanks for sharing! Any more to this series?

'Ko

Hi! This isn't so much a review as a request -- I'm putting together a small archive of Seto/Mokuba fics, and I was wondering if I could archive this and your other Seto/Mokuba-ish ficlets? ^_^ Anyway, just tell me what you think, okay?

Hi! I'm from over at LocketPair on lj. Got a link to read this, and it was really interesting. I haven't read Seto's side of things yet. Just wanted to say that I enjoyed the story that you wrote here.

Oh...but what a way to end it! =D That was _marvelous_ -- it kept the dreamy feel of it and everything! So very very lovely!

=) ta for bothering to write reveiws, even though i've finished!

i'm really glad you liked the ending - i really wanted to keep the "dreamy feel" (as you put so well), and also leave it open... not necessarily for a sequel, but because the whole mokuba/seto thing is very ambiguous anyway. i wanted a sense of closure (they're reunited), while also having a sense of progress (it's a bit of a mokuba-coming-of-age thing, i guess), but not having either of them really confront the large issue of UNRESOLVED SEXUAL TENSION... and i like that we don't -know- if mokuba still wants seto in a sexual way (or if he ever really did) because -he- doesn't know himself. and seto's actions are not -necessarily- intended in a sexual way... AAARRGH! THE AMBIGUITY!!!

anyway, again, THANK YOU for reviewing. i can not stress how BRILLIANT it has been to receive feedback and encouragment. i hope this is a story that sticks in your mind (there are fics i remember occasionally at inappropriate moments - they're the best ones!).

nixwilliams, over and out!

My, I go away for three days and you finish! the story. I really liked it though, Seto's reaction was great...much better than parental style. And I also liked that the end wasn't all sappy. You are right, I do lile angst, yet I am happy that you didn't end the story with Mokuba leaving Seto for good.
Now talking about you not ruling out a sequel or a new story, what can I say, I am glad I don't have to come after you to make you write more^_~
Thanks again for the great read! Can't wait to read more.

heh heh... no, i think that's the end... *rubs hands evilly* *and with glee* ... can i just share with you all this fantastic quote from a random comic sheet i got in a booster pack of cards (ah HA! a fic writer who also has CARDS! unheard of!)... Anzu/Tea is talking, saying (and i quote VERBATIM) "YuGi... You must help Joey! To save his sister from bling!" LMAO!!! Save Serentiy From Bling! it's my new campaign!!! badges, posters, flyers, RALLIES! it'll take over the world. ... ... ok, maybe not.
NOW, to business! thanks for reviewing some more. hope gorging went well for you ;) ... yeah, i think the blue eyes thing is a bit cliche, because GOSH DARN i am sick of fic-seto-eyes... but the blue theme has twined throughout the story, so i guess that validates it somewhat. "Sleepless I" is not related to this story, really. I'll post it sometime, i guess.
ah, praiseofshadows, all good things must come to an end. although i have a feeling that people are somewhat unsatisfied with this one. *grins*...

You are my hero; the last two chapters were great. Poor Mokuba, that sure wasn’t the homecoming he had envisioned, will Seto make it up to him? I actually would like to see Seto do the whole parent routine with scolding and screaming…na, not really^_^
Why was Jou there!? Ah well, at least poor little lonely Yugi has someone now.
And the Seto side story, very nice, I really liked it, thanks for taking the time to write it!
Oh, and one more question, maybe it is just my own stupidity, but when this story is Sleepless II, were is part one?

So, I disappear for a while and when I come back ::bam:: whole new chapters! ::gorges on fic:: Love Mokuba's swirling thoughts as he breaks down and cries. Blue eyes that can never compare to another person's or anything else. How romantic, but not in a too mushy way. I wonder what'll happen when Seto has to confront Mokuba's feelings? As for Sleepless I, you should post it. It'll probably add to the story. If you're unhappy w/ it, it's okay to re-write, ya know? ^_~

Another wonderful few chapters!!!! Yay!!! And don't end it...that would be sadness incarnate! (unless you were planning a sequel *hint hint*) Anyway, great job as always! =D