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person JadedSoul
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful. Please keep going!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shame on you! Now I have to clean all the drool off my keyboard!

That was wonderful - I loved how you managed to keep this in Ryou's POV - and I know how hard it is to do that when the POV character is blindfolded and the like. Well done, and please update when you can!
person KKchan
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@.@ Mmmm. Yuumy. "I'll have Ryou with a side order of whipped cream and Bakura..." =DD

Update soon!!

Thanks for the email letting me know the next chapter was posted. ^^
person DracOnyx
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow . . . that was incredibly hot. Thank you! and Please update soon.

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person YNH
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaay! You posted! I knew the hypnosis book would pay off. ^^ But you can't leave it there! You're evil......

A great start here! Wonder if Yami Bakura will actually *share* this time? Can't wait to find out! See? Nothing bad happens when you update faster. You don't really need sleep, that's just a rumor. *nods*
person DracOnyx
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! EVIL TO END IT THERE! MORE!

DracOnyx
person Wicabeth
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.. This is already hot. I hate you so for not having more! XD