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for The XX Factor *completed*

by Wicabeth

person ShadowofLight
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hoooly sh*t!!! well i hafta agree with trsiten, seto was asking for it. thought if i was joey i would have rammed my knee as hard as i could into his crotch. man u got me hooked!! plz update soon i gotta find out how joey, and the school, are gonna cope wiht this new change!!
person Kupo
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He's gonna have a baby. update update update
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Red flag 1: Unprotected sex
Red flag 2: Short, light period
Red flag 3: Bloating, queasiness and swollen breast.

You are evil. Well, I'd say that Jou isn't changing back into a guy for at least 9 months, ne?

Thanks for the update, and please update again when you can!

Ja!
person maggiemay
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooo...but no lemon? Is okay...I prefer Yaoi to Het. Anyway...whooo...so is joey going to be Joy?
person maggiemay
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
or do I mean have a bundle of Joy...lol (Okay shrieking with laughter)
person Nite Nite *not logged in*
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMGGGGGG! *runs around in cirlces* JOEY IS WITH CHILD JOEY IS WITH CHILD JOOEEYY IIISS WITH CHILD SEETOOOO'SSS CHHHILLLLDD...CHILDREN? *huggles Joey* YOU ARE GIVIN ME BABY...BAIBES! ><

Joey: *pouts* Yea...*teary eyed*

NN: OH dont cry..*huggles more* Nite shall help!

Seto: *blinks* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Joey: *throws a fork at Seto's head* SHUT UP!

Seto:*rubs head but doesnt speak and glares at Nite*

NN: *Glares back* What...you want some of this?

Seto: NO!

Joey: YOU BETTER NOT...no offense Nite.

NN: *nods at Joey and glares more at Seto* Anyway, this is wonderful! ^_^ Are you gonna go threw the months in which Joey is with child...children?

Joey: You better hope there is only one...or I shall take great pleasure in...POKIN LITTLE BLUE EYES INTO PAINFUL NOTHINGNESS! *pulls out Nite's fav. fork with metal tips*

NN: Nice choice!

Seto: =OO= ...you just named my...little blue eyes...*Shakes head and steps away from the fork* dont...hurt me...*looks down* Us...we love you...I love you! *looks down again* I love him!

Joey: *teary eyed* YOU LOVE EM MORE THEN ME!? *cries*

Seto: No..Joey I love you more! Don't cry..plz...*runs up and hugs Joey and then gives him chocolate*

Joey: CHHHOOOOOCCCCOOLLLLLAATTTEEE! *hugs to it* OH WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ALL MY LIFE!? *sees Nite eyein the chocolate* NO NITE..BAD NITE!

NN: *whimpers and stalks toward Joey* SHARE THE LOVE! ><

Joey: NOOOOO! ><

NN: YYYESSS! *tackles Joey*

Seto: NIIITEEE! BECAREFUL YOU MIGHT HURT THE BABY..BABIES!

Joey: *Glares at Seto* Dont worry she wont hurt em...or get my chocolate!

Seto: While those to...rumble a bit...UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
person maggiemay
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blush* thank you so much. I love this fic. Please continue soon...make jou kiss seto's boo boo...lol
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooo you are so cruel! lol anyhoo update soon! =D
person Jonouchi-Kaiba-Mokie
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty funny, love the beginning, about uh-oh being a bad thing. And mention of the talk with Malik. Anyways very funny, and Joey could always go with the Alister look! Who my little sister still thinks is female, contrary to my many times trying to convince her.
person Sushigurl
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaaaa!!!!! I just love your story!!!! Please write the next chapter soon!!!! =)