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Awww....was hoping the baby would get to dress like a whipped cream cupcake with the cherry on top...all satiny ruffles and frills and lace....

O man, that is SOO mean!! don't leave us hanging! Well, XX Factor is GREAT! I enjoy reading it, I like everyone's character and man, the part where Jou was giving birth with marik and bakura sharing the pain had me cracking up. I can't wait for the wedding so hurry and post!!

Down to the wire! He's gonna be screaming his ass off when it's time! update asap!

Now THAT was a perfect punishment for Marik and Bakura. :) You have a twisted mind - I love it!

I LOVE what you did to the evil ones. Ohhhh....and Jou's still gonna kick Seto's ass. LOL. Liked the restaurant scene...I can just see that conversation in my head.
*hugs* great work.

Nicely done. Good chapter. You earned that bathroom break.

lol

Love what you did to Bakura and Malik....they deserved it...and worse. (Especially Bakura for wanting to make it permanent in the first place). Poor Seto...I can guess who gets diaper duty and the midnight feedings. Love the restaurant scene and the boys reaction to the water breaking. Too bad Bakura and/or Malik didn't get closer to Jou during a contraction...I'd have loved the reaction when he got a deathgrip on their balls...They'd probably never go near him again....hahaha)

gotta see how Seto handles fatherhood....and Jou too (as well as motherhood).

Bet Mokie is gonna be glowing all over as the new Uncle.

Bet Seto is gonna try to buy his way out of Jou's bad graces by filling the hospital room with so many flowers there won't be room for a nurse...just to show Jou how sorry he is for all the pain.

Great chap.

I agree with Nomalaz about the most painful day he'll ever experience. I also like the idea of Malik and Bakura fainting....but I'd prefer if it was because Yami made it so that the two had to share Jou's pain while giving birth...whether they are physically in his presence or elsewhere (like maybe at the arcade in the middle of a dance game or at the movies....or even in class) when the labor pains start. Let them think they are being turned inside out through their precious manhood....litterally.

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Waiiiiiiit, if you're naming her after Asuka, where does her older brother come in then? (Asuka has an older brother in YGOGX, unless you're not following that story exactly)