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for The XX Factor *completed*

by Wicabeth

person maggiemay
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* I loved this from beginning to end. I can't wait for your next inspiration. If you're looking for a bunny...I have one ready to go...with the first chappie already written *points to Full Circle*. Great Job...
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...fluffy ending. And it sounds like Yugi gets pissy when he's tired. Hehehe. Probably a good thing that he doens't have a kid of his own - Yami might not survive the experience.

Anyway, lovely ending, and I'll be looking for your next fic!
person Amarant
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, it's sad, but I think this fic is winding down. It was a good read, anyway. I hope you write a sequal where Yugi relents and decides to get pregnant. I think Asuka will wear him down. ^_^ Can't wait to read thhe next chapter!
person DracOnyx
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. No problem with self insertion of that nature . . . hell, look at Barbie Bakura and you'll find myself and Ladywolf_Terri in there : ) I'm sorry to hear about the bad day at work . . . I used to have a problem of that nature myself. Doing a shitload of work because no one wanted to do it, and then dealing with my boss yelling because my ACTUAL job wasn't getting done fast enough . . . it's enough to make anyone's head spin and their vision to go red. Of course, they got what they had coming to them . . . I pushed myself too hard and ended up going into the hospital over a month before my due date to have my little girl.

Hmm . . . to say some of the more concerned and considerate employee's jumped on my boss would be a minor understatement.

Anyway, great chapter, so glad you updated, and my muses send their own greetings, as usual.

DracOnyx and her muses
person smalvina
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved your story.
is this the end?
person Death over Time
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I remember when I was younger and gained my interest in yaoi... I never really researched it though, at first I asked my parents who stared at me in a 'What the fuck?' kinda way, then I just kept reading smut until I grasped the basic concept... I just realised I know more about two guys going at it then a guy and a girl... hell, I know more about three guys going at it then a guy and a girl... yet I know nothing about two girls and I'm bisexual... I should probably start reading yuri
person Maggiemay
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deluscious. and funny...I almost howled when I read the panties thing...and the breast milk was too...funny...I just got an image of a baby face screwed up with distaste...LOL

Maggiemay
person kupo
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was totally worth it. You did great!!!
person Death over Time
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya know what? My mom told me what her cravings were for me and my brother were once. For Me: Melted Chocolate, Pixie Stix, Coca Cola, and Coffee. For my Brother: Carrot Sticks (yes, specifically in stick form) and Whole Milk. *ponders* Carrot Sticks and Milk is disgusting, but I think that the chocolate pixie stick mix could work, I dunno bout the Coke and Coffee...
person Kat-chan
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy... @.@ Wow.

Jou in satin panties...that is surprisingly hot. XD

It's not over yet, is it? ;-; I would be very sad if it were!

O.o How do you do research for lemons? Yeah. I actually want to know. >>;;