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Nice one you bakayaraou why is it that people always take things at face value they never bother to look closer besides considering my options I'd rather be wtih Yami who is fighting his hardest to get his life back under control then with a backstabbing traitor I think Joey's been spending too much time with Seto he's starting to behave just like that rich stuck up bastard and really Joey I think Yugi would be better off not seeing you ever again if you are willin to betray the boy who gave you the life you have on a fucking silver platter huh well keep up the great work and update asap gtg now JA NE

Thats the spirit boys don't either of you give up hope so long as you believe and will it with all your heart and soul that you will be together and more happier then you could ever dream of then it will come to pass huh as for Joey yes his reasons for it were good ones but like in the movie JP the absolute worst ideas ever made are half the time made with the best intentions again look at JP look what happen to them sheesh Joey I admire your reasons but you severely dissapoint me I thought you trusted Yugi and if you did then why won't you listen to him ok so Yami has had a bit of a drinking problem and yes it was a bit because it only lasted for so long unlike Seto that mans been cold hearted since he was a teenager and your telling me that its fine if your in love with some cruel arrogant jerk but its not ok for Yugi to still love Yami regardless of the mistakes he made it was an accident it was never supposed to happen on purpose but it did fate threw them this curve ball and now they have to fix the broken window that is their lives because of it but thats to be expected no ones life is going to be constantly thrown straights all the time expect the unexpected Joey life will throw you those curve balls but only to show you a better path. ok I'm starting a freakin speech here anyways keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE

There's a word for this: AWESOME!

Ryou: AHHHH NOOO YUGI, YAMI LOOK OUT!!

Joey: YOU STAY OUT OF THIS YOU LITTLE BITCH! *punches him*

Ryou: *in between sniffles* YOU'RE GOING TO REGRET THAT!

Joey: Nothing you can do about it, So SHUT THE FUCK UP

Bakura: *grabs a knife* Care to say that again Mutt?

Joey: I ain't.....AHHHHHHHHHH!!

Bakura: Ryou, love are you ok?

Ryou: Thank you Kura! *kisses*

Bakura: Mmmm Ryou

Ryou: My blood, right?

Bakura: Yes and you my koi!

Marik: I think I'm gonna barf

Malik: I'm not its cute, anyway Yami, Yugi go to my apartment and wait for me there...

Yugi: What about Joey?

Marik: Bakura and I wil take care of that jackass

Yami: Thank you...

Marik: It's alright..no go before we change our minds!

Yami: *nods head*

What going to happen to Yami and Yugi, OHHH you naughty peson! leaving it on a cliffe!
Update soon

Ryou: Joey Is such a bastard!

Joey: Say that again bitch?

Bakura: don't you dare threaten my light!

Yami: Yugi, I am a loser!

Yugi: NO YOUR NOT! I LOVE YOU! NO MATTER WHAT YOU'VE DONE, I ALWAYS WILL

Yami: I wish we could be back together..

Yugi: We are...Will you kiss me?

Yami: come here my love *kisses passionately*

Joey: GET OFF HIM, YOU FUCKED UP PIECE OF SHIT!

Yugi: JOEY NO!!

Bakura: *Punches Joey* No one insults The Pharoah but ME and MARIK! GOT THAT?

Joey: Fuck you Bakura!

Ryou: *Kicks Joey* YOU FUCK OFF

Bakura: GO RYOU!

Ryou: *blush*

Marik: HARDER MALIK

Malik: OH GODS YES!

Bakura: Ok, lets all make up and make out

Yugi: *goes back to touching Yami*

Malik: *Makes out with Marik*

Ryou: *gets pushed aside and attacked sexually by Bakura!*

Yami: Oh, Yugi, my love, my Yugi

Yugi: shhh, it's ok

Marik: *is toungue tied with Malik*

Malik: *moans into Marik's Mouth*

Bakura: You're so hot Ryou, Koi

Ryou: Yeah so are you Sexy Boi...

Ok, that was so bizzar, anyway...hope you enjoyed the show, Cute Story line,

Nice so far. The restraining order can go away in court! They don't have to leave! But maybe it's better if they do. Gah! Do what you will, as long as you update soon!

Huh oh joey your hearts in the right place but you don't know the full story its not Yami's fault this happened I mean yest with hurting Yugi he was at fault but only because of what Marik did otherwise this would never have happened besides like your one to talk joey hello your bf to the most arrogant cold hearted and ruthelss buisnessman on the face of this earth they man has had his hands stained with the blood of his stepfather and probalby more if not the lifeblood of buisness people and your telling me that just because Yami made a mistake that makes him worse then Seto Seto deliberately does all the things he does its never done on accident or because somone fed him lies to get back at him for something geeze if you do this Joey Yugi will never forgive you you know that right I dare say he may even come to regret having met you if you keep this up well keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE

I am loving this. please udate soon

Wow, all i can say is......... wow. My brother and i were reading this and what we thought was going to happen actually did. Not that were saying your story is predictable, but we find it interesting that we were right. Now.... Yin wants you to update very soon. Hurry! when he doesn't get what he wants, he gets cranky. And he takes it out on me! Help!

*sighs happily*Well at least now Yami is slightly on the road to recovery now we just need to get them somewhat back to a normal life but there is a lesson to be learned in this Yami you should never had taken Mariks advice so fully into account instead when you got sober you should have asked if Yugi truly wanted its to be that way I mean come on Yami this is Yugi were talking about he never wishes more out of otherwise like what Tohru said in his mind he'd just be asking for it.Yugi is by no means concerned with improving what he feels is perfect*rolls her eyes* dumby huh well a little on the late side but as they say better late then never well keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE