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for Shadowed Violet

by SpiritDancer1

person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry and update soon PLEASE!!! I want to see what Malik does next! I'm cheering for an escape! And a bonus of telling Marik to shove it! ^^
person Shinigami24
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* Bakura, no baka! Ryou's right, the hurt goes way too deep! Besides if Marik keeps his attiude, and hurts Malik, I'm taking Malik away and hell with the consequences! I have ways of cutting off the yami/hikari link! I've read books about abuse before, and plus i have friends who were abuse victims. So I know the scars go way too deep. And selling Malik to Marik made it worse! Since after what Ryou did, there's no way Malik will trust anyone again!
person mariks_toy_hikari
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, very nice. I like. MORE! >.< evil Marik so sexy. And poor Malik--but you know he'll grow to love it.
person DarkMoonInShadow
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH lord...I knew Yami marik in the series was loopy but this guy belong in that isylum my sister went to when she started cutting herself. Holy mother of gods hes crazy ass son of a MO-FO and so very in genius.
Poor malik...*hugs malik dolls with pity* Ryou will save ya.....OR I WILL! lol ^_^.
Its good. It brought me outa my bad mood....mom deleted my story! T_T.....OH WELL..i have it written down somewhere.
Liek before can you email me when ya update?
Thanks.
Later days
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!! Poor Malik! Don't let him get raped again! He has been through too much already!!! I really hopes he finds a way out of this! Update soon please!
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WIN. WIN. YOU ARE A WINNAR. My god, this is GREAT @\_/o I KNEW it. I knew it. But now I can't wait to see what happens between Malik and his new master! PLEASE try and update again soon...
person Nancy
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! your story is becoming one of my favorites^^ If its not a hassle I would like to be emailed when you update as well. Is there going to be any smut later on? *crosses fingers*...I know, im a pervert.......
person Seductive Extinction
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is extremely well written. Great grammar, detail, everything, it's really nice to see such a wonderful fic. I truly hope that Malik's new master is Marik, those two make the sexiest couple in my opinion. Hehe, anyway, I hope the update is soon because I'm quite curious to see what happens next. Keep up the great work. Later.
person DarkMoonInShadow
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No i don know mariks dads name or his moms I don even think they give em. I really like this. I thought aff was lost when its sigh crashed. My friend told me about its relocation here. ^_^ I so happy. I was able to find this. I hope you update soon. Email me when you update or IM me on aol if you have it.
My own YGO vamppie stpry isn't that far along yet but this is really good vamp work. If your interetsed in seeing it gimme an email or IM.
Later days.
Can't wait to see whats next.
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryou's father, Mother, and Malik's father and mother are unnamed in the animated series. I'm not too sure about the Manga. Most people make up names for both boy's realtives, or call them simply Mrs/Mr Ryou, Mr/Mrs Ishtar. Anyways, I'M LOVING IT! Update again soon, please let it be Marik~!! (Even though it's probably Yami...)