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Interesting. I like it.

This is one neat fic. I can't wait to see the interaction between the yamis and the staff of Hogwarts. Especially Snape. I'll be waiting for your next update.

HP/YGO... probably my favorite type of fanfic. Continue, please! I love it so far. X3

A) Is 'Katsuya' Jounouchi's first or last name? It's his LAST name.
B) What is Otogi's JAPANESE last name? LAST name is Otogi. FIRST is Ryuuji.

Update soon!

I noticed a couple additions to the book list. :) Nice chapter, a little slow, but you're still setting up so I forgive you (that was a joke). I wouldn't worry too much about your style - I rather enjoy it.

Looking forward to your update on the 17th!

First, to answer your questions:

A) Katsuya is Jou's family name. In Japan, family name comes first so it would be 'Katsuya Jou' but in England they would say 'Jou Katsuya'
B) Otogi IS his Japanese family name. His personal name is Ryuuji (I'm not completely sure of the spelling).

Why wouldn't 'Kura remember being there 500 years ago? And why was he scared of having dinner with Ryou's father? Is it just normal 'dealing with your lover's family' or is there more to it?

I love this fic and can't wait for more! Update soon please!

Otogi is the last name.... while Ryuuji is the first name. In Japan, ppl call each each other by last name, unless they are related, really close friends, or cute lovers. As for Jounouchi, Katsuya is the first name. Oh, if you wish to know, Ishtal is Malik's last name, not Namu (Namu is a fake name that Malik used to hide behind, around the Yugi-tachi (Yugi's group)). Honda is Honda Hiroto, where Hiroto is his first name (I don't think many people know this one). Also, just for info, Yugi's name in Japanese anime is really Mutou, while Mouto is in dubbed one (or TV version). And also, i know you got the wrong word for 'priest'. It's 'shinkan', not saishi. I had no idea what that was, until i checked your notes and it didn't make sense for me. I should know these stuff, considering that I learned and practiced ever since beginning of high school (I am in third year of college) and also owned all the volumes of Yugioh in Japanese, plus the anime, up to certain point. Not that I am boasting.

Your plot sounds interesting, and the fact is that I don't really like crossovers, but I like this plot. Though your pairings for Harry Potter kinda stunned me there... I heard and liked others, but.... DRACO/RON???? Sorry, I really can't see that one right now. Hopefully, in your story, it will make sense to me (like how they are attracted and got together.... and blah blah blah). If not, well, it can't be the worst pairing anyways.

Any other questions, you may ask.

Kodachi

Your writing style is stilted and awkward. Honestly, I would've pegged you as a preteen, not eighteen. Storyline's a bit overdone, but it seems you have a twist to add, so that's a plus. You might want to consider a beta - it'd do you good.

That's a different premise. Let's see where it goes.

Great beginning! and I love how the plot is so original!! Can't wait to read more.