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for Side Stories to the Engulfed Trilogy

by Ravenx

person Ryou-Lover**
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! ive spent the last two days reading all your stories. and im realli interested in A Tale of Love. i was just wondering, are you planning to update it anytime soon. great writing!!!!!!!!!

Ryou-Lover**
person mistryl
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, the Joey one is first. *hops around* I loved it and that's so like Kaiba, I especially liked the part where Mokuba helped.
person Nancy
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, im glad you desided to continue the series, the side storys are good so far! I noticed with your other storys (especially the last one) there was alot of plot development for 5 chapters, and then everything was ended very abruptly. I know what its like to get tired of a fic, but I think even if you added an epilogue, the story would seem more unified and a little less hurried. Your writing stil rocks my world though ^^
person Camille
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joey. I like the story though. It was cute. I can't wait for the next one! It is Yuugi or Malik? I bet Malik smacks Marik around a few times before they get together permanently. :)
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Boy, Seto really is a cold bastard, isn't he? Good thing Joey fell in love with him, or else it would have been living hell for the guy.

Great chapter - I want to see the others!
person jadedkatrina
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent... great start to the side stories... can't wait to
read more when they come... Is this going to be one chapter
for each of the majestics or will it be more than that for each
one...

anyways update soon

and I want the twins... please... pretty please with Ryou on top...

gotta go

Jadedkatrina
person Crazy Demon
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, if I were Joey I'd be feeling the exaaact same way. Or idk... I'd just be like "OKAY, I'll be your slave!!!" But Seto doesn't like GIRLS *sob* that's okay though, we like it when everyone is gay *nod* Anyway, good. I'm assuming this is it for the Seto/Joey chapter or is it not done and... idk. He's immortal now so we probably are supposed to assume right? That's all good too. Very good. No one was out of character, which is awesome considering who we're talking about... Rock on with ya bad self! *can't wait for the Yami/Yugi chappie*
person Horizont
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!

I'm so thrilled, I love it, it's fantastic! More, more, more of that, please! *shakes ravenx to underline her point*
I *love* Seto/Jou-slave-fics! And there are just not enough of them...! ^_^x
How he has Joey call him 'master'... *sigh* that's just wonderful, isn't it? (Joey: "well, it isn't really...!")
Anyway, I so want to read the next part of this! ^^x

~Horizont (I'm your fan! XD)
person janet
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As usual the master has strike again!!!!
Bravo....Bravo...Bravo
I cant wait for more.....At first when i read ur fics i wonder how the lights became the mate of their darkness[except ryou]....i thought that this question of mine wont ever be answered but now...you have proven me wrong
And sooooo......I Love YA!!!!

ja ne
update soon
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOoOo!!! That was so cool ^-^. Is Seto/Jou done? Or are you gonna add another chapter? Please update soon! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read what happens next!