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for Side Stories to the Engulfed Trilogy

by Ravenx

person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! Yami/Yuugi goodness! *Squeals* XD. Tee hee... It's so cyute! And wow... Yami got Yuugi pregnant in their first session! XD. Speaking of babies, you should have another side story of the moments of when they have their kidlings XD. Oooo... Sekani ish in there ^-^. I'm glad he was easy for you to write ^-^. Update soon please!
person Camille
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was so sweet, I got cavities! ;) I loved it. It was a nice story. It figures Yami would be the nice one. I can't wait for the Marik/Malik one. I know Malik is going to whip Marik good! Heh.
person Sarah Costa
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!! YAAAAAAAYYYYYY!!! YAMI/YUGI FOREVER!!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! THEY ARE MY FAVORITE COUPLE. PLEASE CONTINUE THE GREAT WORK. JA
person Seika
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I´ve already readed your side story (sorry I can´t read it sooner). It´s so lovely^^. I can´t wait for malik and marik´s chapter ^O^
person Horizont
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's so awfully cute! Geez, these two are always so gentle, so loving...
...but to be honest I liked the parts with Seto and Joey best! *gg* I still LOVE it how Joey calls Seto 'master'... really I just can't get enough of it! I'm so glad their part came first so they had an appearance in this one, too! :P
Well, and of course I'm looking forward to the Marik/Malik-chapter! ^_^x

BUT! I so do want something with Athan and Brennan! >_Never mind, write that other story of yours! ^^x I might read it... but I'm not forgetting about the twins, nope! ^^;; And it's your own fault for creating such lovable characters!

~Horizont
person Mina
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was soooo cute. I loved it. IT was well written. Can't wait till the next chapter.
JaNe
person chelsey
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
konnchi-wa
i havent reviewed you since, you first started on the engulfed trilogy (though i still read it sorry)
so i dont know if you remember me but i asked you actually begged you to do a story about jou and seto that took place before when jou was firt setos slave. and you did! witch i am truly thankful for i loved it! please more side stories!
i will have to read the last part of the trilogy. thanks again!
person person
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah. Coolio. I love it. Please post the next chappie soon!
person Kit
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story!!..its so great!!....please please put up the next one!!
person YEHUDIS
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn seto is mean and whats with the world blood above or on bakuras bed? but i like it so far cant wait to see what happens with the others