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for Lucky the Puppy

by Glue

person yamiyugiforever
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im kind of confused? Is jou the dog lucky and honda the cat? please answer me cuz im confused.
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2
person Angel_Belle
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that...I accidentally did a typo before...I didn't mean your story was a 2, it was cute! LOL
person ToonMistress
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sits with Mokuba in her lap and brushing his hair* Dun worry. He's consenting! And Seto! How dare you look at those pictures! Now I'm doubling the price! Plus I got new ones. Some sexy leather outfits.

You've gotta keep adding Glue! I love this so much! Lucky's beginning to remind me of my dog, Draco. He'd be like a black haired version of Jou if he was human. Max doesn't like him all that much. rust me. Draco's taken Max down in a fight. Max is kind of like Seto.

Max: Take that back.

Update! I want more! *hands GLue copies of the newest pics of Jou* Don't let Seto see them.
person Anon
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh sooo cute please go on!!!
person Lee
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute fic. I love the Lucky POV. Mystery: who is the dog? where is Jou? who exactly was the 'Bringer of food' as many YuGiOh characters have gravity defying hair? Tune in next time? Definitly.
person satisified_frog
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading and I think I just figured out were Jou is - and who Lucky is! More Please!
person ToonMistress
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!!! Lucky. Meet Max. Max. Lucky.
Max: Why do I have to meet another little creature like myself?
Because you're both cute! And you've had experience in this situation. And Seto. Those copies are still up for grabs. Plus a new one I just happen to have. *grins* I never knew Jou could bend that way.
Max: Lemme see! O.O Hot damn! I wanna get in the pants of that sexy boy!
You'd think Seto would have enough money for these pictures.
You've gotta keep adding!!! *big watery Mokuba-like eyes* Pwease? *holds up Mokuba plushie* Mokuba plushie demands that you do!
Mokuba plushie: *squeaks*
^____^ *nuzzles Mokuba plushie* I honestly love Mokuba. My favourite Kaiba! Sorry Seto, Mokuba has you beat in being kawaiiness. I'll adopt Mokuba and Bewd for a while!
Max: Aren't you Pegasus's niece?
Ummm.... Yes. But that has nothing to do with it! I'm not going to steal anyone's souls! Just molest their bodies while they sleep. But I will only molest Mokie if I'm allowed to.
Max: I wouldn't trust her.
person pink
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_< So cute! I can't wait to read more
person Insane Yaoi Luffer
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xD Funny. Me luffs it. Quick question: where's the M/M?! Its says Seto/Jou but I don't see any....hmm.....okay. Well, I'll just wait and see. 0.o