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for Lucky the Puppy

by Glue

schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
........NOOOSE! **pout and sits in a corner wait for the next chapter**
J-chan
person BlackLadyCharon
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest of this? And Mahado, get your ass over to Pharaoh and EXPLAIN!!!!!
person smalvina
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't belive it was Mahado
plz update soon
person so
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so cute. really. thats all i can say.
person girlo
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna be honest here, your story really confuses me.... That doesn't mean I won't keep reading, I just thought you might like to know.
person ShadowMagicks
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Jou? Did he transform from Lucky? I'm assuming if he did it means he got his memory back..? You are an amazing writer and I think you should at least try to write yaoi because I write yaoi really well and I am a 14 year old female virgin! Be proud of what you are! Anyway I still think you should try at least....keep writing! Love ya. Rock on!

Shadow
person yamiyugiforever
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK I know lucky is joey and the bringer-of-food is jou. Whos the cat and whats goin on im really confused? Sorry for my stupidity ^_____^x heh heh. update soon.
person yamiyugiforever
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorrry i messed up the names jou is the puppy and honda is the bringer-of-food. please answer my question ^_-
person Heike
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"the whole 'virgin and a girl to boot. and never had a boyfriend. or kissed" you wrote as a reason to not be able to write yaoi? Shoot :) that's what I am too, and guess what? I write yaoi porn :P

Nice story though.
person Yamima
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute fic what happens next?