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for I Couldn't Wait

by SpiritVampire

person jin1377
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wuh? oh goodness!!! it's 1 a.m.!!! i'm in a very bad mood so you may be very happy thati don't flame you like hell cause that's whati always do when i'm in a bad mood. it was pretty good.
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyahhh!!! i love it X3......omg i'm a sucker for yugi as a horny bastard XD....it oddly seems appropriate XD...i loved this it was funny and cute.....and of course hott.....oh and i giggled uncontrollably when yami mind crushed that fly XD.....sounds like something i would do XD....love love love this *huggles and kisses*
person Tasha
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice...steamy too!
The little bit where almost like light/dark chnaged over was cool.
person mizukimarr910
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit that was good i loved that it was excellent. please keep writing and update again soon.

thanx mizukimarr910
person yamiyugiforever
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. If I were a guy i would be hard up I think. um continue writing.
person Row
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, gave me a distraction...*cough*, well keep going lol, ^_^
person Sarah Costa
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great. Thanks for written such one-shot. Keep up the great work. Please post more. Ja ne.
person ToonMistress
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm..... Class or sex. Class? Sex? I'd go with Yugi on sex instead of class. Sex is a lot more fun.
person Heike
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say this proved to be a very good break from work. Thanks for 5 great minutes, now i'm all loaded to work again ;)
Good little fic. Hope to read more.