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for Unbreak My Heart

by LadyLaran

person DracOnyx
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hugglepile!*

You know I love it hun . . . you're doing a great job, and I do like how you reflected recents events in this latest chapter. Very well done, love.

Drac and Kura
person shadowz
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. The way you describe the sadness that the hikari"s and everyone else are feeling is awsome. I very seldom read incomplete stories, but yours is so good I'm glad I did.
person MinuetLove
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet story! I'm really enjoying it so far and hope to read more soon!
person Diayma
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I love your fic so far!! Just one question...the yamis ARE coming back...aren't they? Please?! Otherwise, I love how the fic is going and I hope that you'll get Seto and Joey together. Keep up the good work!
person DracOnyx
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more, more, more, more, more . . . MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dang it, you're killing me here woman!

And Bakura says your welcome : )

Drac
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I hope this doesn't wander too far off base though - I still want to know what's going to happen with the yami and hikari pairs.

Keep writing!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And if you don't finish this I'll send Atem after you and you'll have to listen to he and Bakura argue. ;)

Lovely chapter - I can see you plan on getting Tris and Duke together - although this is the first time I've ever seen anyone speculate that Duke is half-Irish! Though with the black hair and green eyes, I guess it makes sense...

Anyway, please update soon!
person Shinigami24
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*DEATH GLARE* I agree with DracOnyx! UPDATE ASAP! Or I'll send not only Bakura, but alsmo Atemu, Marik and Seth after you! Along with several of my other insane muses! Set Joey and Seto up! *blinks* Duke's Irish? Explains his green eyes...
person Velvetina
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this is so sad and so beautifully written. I have to admit I laughed liek hell at the idea of Bakura having enough nerve to steal a God's headress, so like him! Update soon I can't wait to see what happens
person DracOnyx
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Would I do that? *pauses for a moment to look back at Bakura* Yeah, I would, wouldn't I? *grins* MORE! Don't make me crack that whip, oh Mistress of Rabid Wombats!!!!!!