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for Divine Intervention

by CountessErzsebet

person Shawver
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaahahaha!! xD ok, usually i hate these 'gender swapping' fics, but this is priceless. the first few chapters i couldnt stop laughing (espessially the whole Yami getting into the car and the leather smell thing. yes, he is deffinatly still a man.) Beautifully done so far, are you still updateing? if so, please do so soon! is Yami gonna become a guy again? because, i guess if you want to, you can end it here and just have him be a her. and...i'll stop rambling now -___- (i should really not type when i'm half asleep...)
person Beck
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've just read your story, and its not the usual type of stroy I do read but this one is really good, please keep going
person Niffty24
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Poor yami! I hope he can find a cure soon!
person DracOnyx
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I suspect that line and I are going to become intimately acquainted. Loved the chapter, and GO YAMI! That's what you get for being an ass, Seto!

DracOnyx
person Chaos Dragon
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! About damn time Seto got a hold of Yami!! I didn't blame him (her) one bit for dancing with those two!!
Dragon
person Shinigami24
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* Poor Yami! *LOL* I know Bakura hates Yami and all, but does he realize that he might be exposed to PMS and all, if he happens to wander by...Cuz it looks like Yami might be starting his period soon...
person Kat
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is ok, I've read allot better... And you’re seriously making Yami to be too much like a stereo typical like female that’s what makes your story sort of pathetic, and horrible.

Keep working at it though, it’s not as bad as some of the other fics I have read and if your trying to make this into a comedy.. Try harder because this fic isn’t really that funny.
person DracOnyx
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I don't usually read the 'Yami turned female' stories, this one is just too good to resist! Update soon! I'm absolutely dying of laughter here!

DracOnyx
person ladybard96
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO! Welcome to the wonderful world of womanhood, Yami.
person puff_ball
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its alright I sereisly need to now what happens next now. umm mind if I ask if Yami will always be a girl from now on? well its cool hope you keept writing this. o.o sort of creeps me out that Ymai is a girl though..