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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned you are hotness incarnate? Man your fics are good!
I must say there was one thing I found that I particularly didn't like about this fic and that was Atemu being kept in the dark as to Yugi and Seto's activities. I'm of the firm belief that readers should LIKE the main characters of a story their reading, and it's hard to get over the fact that the characters in this care so little over cheating on a significant other. The fact that Yugi is able to cheat on a person he loves makes me lose complete respect for him as a character. (But hey, what do I know, Death Note is one of the most popular manga out there and that main character is completely without morals.)
Anyway, it was just a small thing in an otherwise amazing fic. I've read a lot of bondage fics and your knowledge of the subject definitely shows in the story. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm all hot and bothered and must go read the rest of your fics.
I must say there was one thing I found that I particularly didn't like about this fic and that was Atemu being kept in the dark as to Yugi and Seto's activities. I'm of the firm belief that readers should LIKE the main characters of a story their reading, and it's hard to get over the fact that the characters in this care so little over cheating on a significant other. The fact that Yugi is able to cheat on a person he loves makes me lose complete respect for him as a character. (But hey, what do I know, Death Note is one of the most popular manga out there and that main character is completely without morals.)
Anyway, it was just a small thing in an otherwise amazing fic. I've read a lot of bondage fics and your knowledge of the subject definitely shows in the story. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm all hot and bothered and must go read the rest of your fics.
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Seriously, wow, this is an amazing series (that I wouldn't have minded to be longer, but it's good as it is).
I enjoyed it a lot and it kept me awake for hours when I really should have been sleeping. XD
Kaiba's need for power was beautifully in character and made a fitting contrast for Yugi's submission.
Thx for this story!
~jea
I enjoyed it a lot and it kept me awake for hours when I really should have been sleeping. XD
Kaiba's need for power was beautifully in character and made a fitting contrast for Yugi's submission.
Thx for this story!
~jea
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"anon" the great Yugi-torture lover here at affnet - I hope you're still around!
Well, well, well. Don't I feel special to get a dedication. ::smirks:: I would say I’m sorry to keep you waiting, but I tend not to apologize…to anyone. Even to a writer who has more than proven herself worthy. I wonder if you are still are interested in BDSM? …though I must say I’m severely disappointed by the…lack…of fanfiction lately. Perhaps I have been persuaded to look at your other writing now.
Well, well, well. Don't I feel special to get a dedication. ::smirks:: I would say I’m sorry to keep you waiting, but I tend not to apologize…to anyone. Even to a writer who has more than proven herself worthy. I wonder if you are still are interested in BDSM? …though I must say I’m severely disappointed by the…lack…of fanfiction lately. Perhaps I have been persuaded to look at your other writing now.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just reread this for the umpteenth time. This and "Room of the Soul", is what hooked me to Seto/Yugi fics since '05. Sadly, there are too. few around these days. Donno why, I have a feeling that this, and few (very few) others may have to be be revisited often these days. Noticed your still around. Just wondering if you still have the "knack" for this pairing? tinkletimekelly
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I don't need to know those subjects perfectly," he sneered. "I can hire people to know them for me."
That line right there is the single most Kaiba thing I've EVER seen written... and DAMN that was hot! Though I'd love to see a chapter where Yugi does explain how Atemu used to be cruel... Because now I'm curious... Anyways, really great fic. I liked it.
That line right there is the single most Kaiba thing I've EVER seen written... and DAMN that was hot! Though I'd love to see a chapter where Yugi does explain how Atemu used to be cruel... Because now I'm curious... Anyways, really great fic. I liked it.
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love it when kaiba is a cold bastard! As it seems, yugi loves it too. My love for both has deepend. As has my love for you. *gets down on one knee*....Will you marry me? *eye twitches*...
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was.... amazing. I'd love to give a detailed review, but frankly, I cna't think well enough too, and I'm sorry for it.
It was... delicious. I don't have much experience with anything of the sort, but that doesn't mean I can't enjoy it far more then I should, heh. Delicious.
It was... delicious. I don't have much experience with anything of the sort, but that doesn't mean I can't enjoy it far more then I should, heh. Delicious.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
totally awesome story!!
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so much! I've read almost all of your yugioh based fanfics and this one is really a work of art. I can't wait for future chapters to be added to it. Please kepe up dating it and adding to it! Thanks!
~Havoc
~Havoc
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm . . . maybe Yugi will now realize how much of a GOOD thing it is that Atemu has curbed that side of his personality for Yugi. Nice job on that chapter.
DracOnyx
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