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for Blackwater Indiscretions

by zehlyah

person nancy
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God i loved this chapter, bakuraxyugi is my favorite pairing ^^ You did it justice!
person S. Chensu (of S. Chensu and Luff from the ff.net realm)
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was recommended this story because I've been looking for something like this for a while now and...well...wow. I was thinking of spending this whole review screaming my head off but that may not be a good idea, although I did feel like screaming a couple of times...

Well, where to start... I suppose I should first of all say that so far, I am really liking the development that's going on here. With the characters I mean. For the moment I am going to reserve judgement on who should "win" in my opinion until I've read the Yami and Malik chapter (I think it's those two left isn't it?) but I wonder what could happen when they all stay with their boyfriends...it would be really great if they took the lessons they had learnt and tried something different. Like Yami not being so gentle with Yugi etc etc, blah blah blah. But it isn't up to me, it's up to you!

I think the best scenes so far have to be the ones with Ryou because he's my favourite character anyway and it's quite different to what he's used to I think. But what's going to happen afterwards I wonder...will they just return to normal or will this affect them? Someone said something about wanting to be with someone else so maybe that's something I should keep in mind for the future...

But anyway, I'm talking a load of rubbish now so I'll be going. But I'm pretty sure I'll be back for the next chapter!

S. Chensu xxx.
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hold on, sweetheart... holy fucking hell! That was the most evilly sexy thing I have ever read. I can't beat that!!! Bakura is GOD. *falls on her face worshipping*
If you are gonna kidnap me, PLEASE let me be your uke. I fucking love you! *glomp, kiss, squish, grope*

Great chapter hun, really... you blew me away. I is dead. *_*
person sglily
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are no words to describe how hot Hot HOT this story is! Keep up the good work! Looking forward to the outcome... it will be very interesting what the 'lights' have to say about their little experiment...
person Marik
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update fast and I'll let you fondle my rod. Come on, honey, you know you want to! *evil grin*
person Bakura
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I fucking rule. *wink* The pissen Pharaoh has nothing on me now, does he! HAHA!
Oh yes, I agree with that fiend Marik...UPDATE!
person Wicabeth
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*... pants.... * That..... was incrediblely hot and kinky o.o;;;;;

*squirms around in her chair* I'm so torn now on who to vote for.
person Yugi Motou
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You hate me, don't you? My ass will never be the same after that! I'm not complaining though...
What's this about 'Pricks'??? *giggle*
person Malik Ishtar
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and update so I can get my rocks off, woman!
person Ryou Bakura
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... I love you? Please hurry up and update?