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for Blackwater Indiscretions

by zehlyah

person MinuetLove
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story! I was so glad to see all the updates I'd missed when I was offline for what seemed like forever! I can't wait to see where you take it next! I hope to read more soon!
person DarkRoseDamael
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! this was a great fic! cant wait until the next update.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Shall I do another porn movie summary for this review? *snicker* Nah.. but if I were to make this into a movie, I'd call it "Take it Like a Man." LOL
Thank you bunches for *cough* getting it up today. Totally fucking hot and yummy! Top notch job, sis! I shall reward you later tonight with that Yami Marik picture I've been talking up. *evil grin*

*squish*


person Anon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i still vote bakura
person Kugatsu
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY MALIK!

^w^


God, i love this fic so much.
person Marik_Ishtar
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has GOT to be one of THE best Ra damn fic's I have ever had the pleasure of reading! You kick some major ass!
person Naria
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Know what, Bakura isnt half as evil as you!! >o< But, I mean that in a good way! ^_^ Erm...I really, REALLY like this story. It's given me some....inspiration, to which my boyfriend has benefitted! AW GOD! THIS KICKS ASS!! I know what should happen! After the contest is over, they should have a mass orgy amongst the yamis so they can form THEIR opinions! YEAH!! MORE YUMMY SEX!! I have to say, I'm voting for all three at this point, even though I am a Yami hater! Sorry, I normally hate his badly dubbed guts, but you've made me actually LIKE him!! But of course I'm a pervy Marik and Bakura fancier...But man, these guys sure know how to treat a hikari! They're all so fabulously written that I forgot they weren't real! I wish I was one of the boys...but I'm not! *tear* But, I'd be deathly afraid of Bakura...He was so scary! I'm a sadist, not a masochist, but I sure as hell would have loved to have seen his romp with Malik for REALS! *drool*drool*pant* But, you have to update soon just becasue I wrote you an obscenely long and rabid worshipping fangirl-esque review....because that's what you've made me...A rabid fangirl of your creative and tasty writing! YAY!! Good times, you evil EVIL person you! But evil CAN be good! WOOT!!
person Naria
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S.

More hurt and comfort and consolation and EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *brain implodes* OW!!

=_= I hate it when that happens...

Okay, I just wanted you to know that I love how you've written Bakura as a hard bastard, but then he's really a loving and gentle master...SO GOOD! I almost cried WITH Malik after his trying endeavor! It was soooo FLUFFY in a sadomasochistic way, which, by God, is the best way there is! Fluffy bondage...that sounds so wrong, but you write it so hot! "It's okay to cry." *sniffle*sniffle* I want a master like that! I'm a sucker for hurt and comfort, and, my friend, you've written the best so far! I can't WAIT for the rest! Still voting for all three yamis! Arrogant bastards!
person Kugatsu
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting....
person Velvetina
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOk that was pretty hot although I'll admit I winced but in a way I can see Bakuras point and Yugi enjoyed himself. I'm sorry I didn't get squicked by that chappie but my vote still goes out for Marik! Marik all the way!!!