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Whoot! About time! This is some good stuff;) I love my lemons! Keep up the great work!

Well, that was... unexpected. :D Go Malik! Looks like everyone's learning something new, but then, that was the point, wasn't it? :P Anyway, my vote is for Marik and Yugi, with Malik and Yami coming a very close second :) Can't wait for the final verdict!

Wow, the ending made me laugh, that was really funny! I'm not sure if it was supposed to be but yes, there could now be a fourth runner in the prize! Whatever the prize is supposed to be...

Another good chapter (of course), and seeing one of the “hikaris” being dominant is a really nice change! And now…everyone will be back with their boyfriends. I wonder what’s going to happen. Just make sure that Ryou doesn’t get hurt too badly…please? Maybe they’ll make use of their new lessons… Oh well, there’s no point in me speculating, I’ll just have to wait until you’ve written and posted the next chapter up!

On that note, please update soon (well what else was I supposed to say?) because I REALLY want to know what happens next! Anyway, bye for now.

S. Chensu xxx.

That was great and unexpected!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

woah holy crap...go Malik...I reckon Malik should win!!! He manages to please everybody, he let Bakura do whathe wanted and he managed to give Yami one hell of a good time! Lol that being said my overall vote goes fro marik still. I've said that from teh star and I'm sticking to it. But wow awsome story!

This story is awsome! I will admitt i was a bit disapointed that Marik and Ryou didnt actually fuck but eh..maybe you'll make up for that in a later chapter?!
Every single lemon is great! You know what would make a great ending..a six-some. lmfao!

Anyhow, LOVE THIS so much. Really hot!!
I think my favourite would have to be the Bakura/Malik one..because..just..WOW! *puts on fan to cool off*
Keep up the good stuff! Cannot wait for more.

I must have been buried in a hole not to notice your updates. Man this competition is getting intense. I 'm sorry but Yami cannot have my vote, he became uke, and although I love an uke Yami, in this contest I thought he was going to have angry sex with Malik. Marik has my vote for first place, Bakura secomg and Yami third. Can't wait for the last day.

Oh yeah...that was great! My brain is slowly coming back to life from the euphoria your words had placed it in. IT TINGLES GOOD!! ^_^ AND SO ON! I am SO anxious for the next chappies!!^_^ More of the tastiest man-smut ever created awaits us, but you're still hiding it in your brain!! QUIT BEING MEAN!! Share the yaoiful goodness...not that I wouldn't blame you for wanting to keep it all...But, MAN!!! I crave this stuff like...like...like a fat kid craves cake on a no-carb diet!! Or, in YGO terms, like Bakura craves ripping Yami into little shreds with a pocket knife, a rusty spoon, and varoius rabid rodents before sending him screaming like a little girl into the shadow realm!! I LIKE doom! ^_^ But we speaketh not of that which is doomful and hearken of dread, but rather, that which is loving and full of man sex! GO YOU! I totally forgot what I was saying, but something along the lines of "OH MY GOD ZEHLYAH IS A FUCKING GENIUS!!!" keeps poking at my concoiusness! WOOT! So I shall take my leave, and best wishes to you! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! O.o *cough*cough*hack* O.o Sorry...my evilness came out...

woo, yeah! I like Malik/Yami, too. but so far, leading all the way out in front, is Marik/Yugi. that was just brilliant. the absolute best :D:D:D:D inspiring, if you like.

can't want to read more of this -bounce-

keep up the good work!

Mmmm, so nice. Gotta wonder if Yami is going to ask Yugi to take him more often. *glee*