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o.0 wow, another great chapter. I'll cast my vote in with Bakura ^^o Keep writing.....please?

Woah...that was...intense. Yes, that is the right word to use...

It's nice to see this story update though, even if it was to make me very scared...I hope Malik's ok...but it was sorta cool that Marik mentioned Yugi coz they're always mean and nasty about him. I hope there's some more development between them though but not before you write about Ryou/Bakura and Yugi/Yami. I wonder what's going to happen with them...? Mind you, it's kinda obvious...

Oh well, I hope you continue writing and hopefully I'll get to read another chapter soon.

S. Chensu xxx.

P.S. sorry about this being short, I've been at work today and have not been sleeping a lot lately. Plus the whole chapter did freak me out a bit.

That was a weird chapter on Marik and Malik. Is Marik going to go back to normal after this whole competition thing is over?
Next chapter is Ryou and Bakura, right? Perhaps you should put some angst in there... or humor. It would be funny if Ryou locked himself up in the bathroom and refused to come out and have sex with Bakura.
So, after this whole competition, will the story still be going on? I mean, is it going to turn into a whole story, with this just the starting point, or will it just finish after you've tied off all the loose strings?
Please let me know!

Damn, that was fucking intense. i liked it in a freakish way but that's just because it was interesting to see Marik lose control. Poor Malik-chan. Please Update soon.

Hot hot hot, that was awesome, you write the interactions so well. I can hardly wait for the update. AWESOME!

Great Update! Marik is one scary mofo! Malik really didn't know what he got himself into. I hope they can reconcile! Once again, great update!

Ahhh creepy! Although my vote STILL goes for Marik. He gave Malik what he asked him for, almost begged him for. Marik has always taken into consideration what each of his partner needs and wants. And he warned Malik but Malik didn't listen. Ya know in a way I can almost see the pairings swapping round because Bakura Malik where hot together, Yami Ryou where awsome and Marik Yugi is still my fave. And now they each knows whats out there. But it may just be me.

Baby, you're the most amazing thing out there!

That was an incredible chapter, but man, you are such a fucking tease!! I can't wait to see what else happens! You've painted them both so perfectly.

I bow to you!

~Su

Poor Malik... I don't know if I should feel bad for him or not.. I hope this gets fixed! They need to be happy! So glad you finally updated! I practically woke the whole house with my scream of joy in seeing this story on the recently updated.

You know, it never ceases to amaze me how sexy mind fucking is. Very nice job. As my reward to you, I will post the next chapter of Hellraisers II tomorrow... the 1 year anniversary of my death. *snicker* (That just sounds... fucked up. lol)