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WOW!! I WANT MORE!!!

Omg! This is the best ever! How some one could make up such and interesting story with so many great and totally HOT lemons is beyond me! I usually only like YugixYami stories, but this has changed my mind. Yugi with ~anyone~ is dead sexy, and Yami with ~anyone~ is even sexier! I also now love Marik and Malik, they are awesome! I can't wait for you to update, i wonder what Yugi and Yami have learned and what they will use on each other...EEEEEEE! I am already dying in anticipation! Please hurry! You rock!

The chapter was good; I want to know what happen with Yami and Yugi. I am waitting for there get to gether.

Hey
I didnt mean that your spelling wa bothering me, I just thought you would like to know if there where mistakes ^^;
I would beta for you, but i dont think you want that.... i proof read my friends midterm essay and she got a D. I guess thats what majoring in science gets you......the reading and spelling of a 5 year old. So I dont care if you edit or not. Are you going to be updating your other story anytime soon?
Sorry to ramble on...Im procrastinating on my hw :P

Hey, it's good to see you update again! As for the chapter...it was very short. But it did answer some of my questions about Bakura and Ryou. I'm glad you didn't do any usual sadomasochism stuff coz then it would have been like nothing had been learnt at all from what's happened. But Bakura was being well out of order and he really annoyed me. But then I suppose that means you've written his character well so all's good.

Anyway, I'll be around for the next chapter, which I think is actually the one I'm looking forward to the most, even though I'm not a great fan of Yugi x Yami. Keep up the good work!

S. Chensu xxx.

Wow. I don't think you need to worry about this chapter being subpar because that is hardly the case. Bakura and Ryou... Ryou and Bakura... God... just to fucking hot! I loved it how Ryou was really pissed off and the ugly head of jealous arose. And, that he stood up to Bakura and told him about it. That he didn't like the fact that Bakura enjoyed taking Malik whom Ryou knew wanted Bakura to begin with. Ooooh twisted. Loved how Ryou was able to knock Bakura out of his completely dominate nature and get his own way. Personally, I loved the chapter... maybe becauset I am partial to this pairing. Regardless... well done and look forward to more!

Im so glad your still working on your stories, they are both great! it was weird to read a chapter with bakura that was so fluffy, but it was a nice break. Thanks for updating! Oh, there are a few typos so you may want to go over it again if you have time :P

Baby, this was good! Not up to snuff? FEH!! You're doing a marvelous job messing with these guys, each chapter is unique and brings out a lot of character!

Keep it up!! WOO HOO!!

Glad you updated, i do like the way you are dealing with the return to original partners. Marik and Malik who we didn't expect to have trouble did, and bakura and ryou who we did expect to have trouble didn't very cool.

Yay more updates!