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Now when i saw that this was updated i was bored out of my skull and i got so damned excited about reading something good that i accedently knocked myself in the teeth. it kinda hurts but this totally makes up for it. Thank you for the lovely chapter.

I have to admit as cute as Ymai was Marik is still my fave, I hope that you don't take so long to update this time *pout* your style of wrting is amazing! Go you! xx

woo. now i've read it all ^_^ and my absolute fave so far is Marik/Yugi. fucking hot.

they were all well written, but the M/Y was the absolute best. Keep up the good work :D

Well, I did enjoy this chapter as well. Ryou finding something he needed in Yami as well as Yami finding something he wanted in Yugi. The only request I would make is that the couples don't break up over this. Please update as soon as you can!

oh my fucking god :| that was so fucking hot :|:|:| and really, really well written. fucking hell, i've found another pairing -drools- Marik X Yugi. And Marik X Yami while I'm thinking. Omy god .... that was just fucking brilliant. i hope you keep up the good work. That was really, really nicely done.

Goob job. I'm sitting here feeling very satiated for my need to read pr0n! Lolz...

bring on the Marik X Yugi :D:DD: -bounce-

Oh wow those two were hot. I can't wait for more. This is the best Yu-Gi-Oh fic idea I have ever seen. Add into that such damn good writing and characterization and you get well I'm not sure what you get because I still can't think after reading these two chapters and as for voting on which is better well I just can't do that until I see all the other pairings together. That should be nine chapters I believe and then and epilogue so with the first chapter it will be a total of eleven chapters. Except that I really really want to see another chapter with all of them getting it on at once. Maybe in the final chapter when the hikari's are comparing notes with one another at Bakura's since you said that's were they gather at. Oh and maybe some chapters with the Yami's getting it on with one another. If it was anything like Malik and Bakura I would just absolutely love to see one with Bakura and Marik. Would Bakura be able to top Marik? Oh and what's Yami going to think when he sees the marks on Malik and realizes that Yugi is with Bakura right then? Will he freak and go after Yugi? Or will Malik manage to convince Yami that Bakura would be gentler with Yugi? Maybe because Bakura wants to win the competition so badly and knows that if he is too rough then Yugi will be scared off? Anyway please please hurry up with the next chapter. I can't wait to seee the Bakura/Yugi pairing. There really is neither enough stories with all of them together or enough with Bakura/Yugi. SO KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pS PLEASE HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPER PLEEEAASSEEE

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Great story! I like how Marik was more of a gentleman then he is usually portrayed. Bakura's as crazy as ever, but still manages to remain loveable...it's great! I hope to read more in the near future!

WHAT NO!!! I MUST HAVE MORE! *begins to cry*