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for Blackwater Indiscretions

by zehlyah

person AngelViper9
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaayy!!! For day one... please update soon!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING RA.....HOLY FUCK...THAT WAS......
:::DIES:::
~*Here lays MI77. She died from Ryou/Yami hotness. Ra rest her twisted, corrupted, fucked-up soul*~

Holy shit, babe, that was fantabulous! Wowzaz! MORE MORE MORE!!! (I'm thinking they all need to go at it ...as a group now. tee-heeee...)

person Kugatsu
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I remember reading this before! I love this fic it's so hot and sensual!
person NJ
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hyperventilates* This is one of the hottest things I have read. It's an addiction, please update soon! *slides off her chair and dies*
person SW
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really have to compliment you on your writing skills. You choose your words well and overall it's dynamic to read. The technique aside, I also like how you describe the scenes. Very graphical, almost touchable. Well done, and keep it up! I'd like to read more of this.

I don't know yet which one of them I think is best. All three of them had something unique, and they were all ...fascinating?... to 'watch'.
person Cherazz
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome would best describe this;) Great work! Yami and Ryou was really hot=D
person ralphiere
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEEEEEE*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now sweetie, that was worth the wait! You were all worried for nothing - this was amazing! Good for you getting your groove back, because I really can't wait for you to have Bakura torture Yugi!! XD

*dances around happily* You made my day!
person Wicabeth
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I really have a hard time deciding! Marik or Yami.. Marik or Yami..

I'm still leaning to Marik because it was just so hot!
person Nancy
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay another update! Usually i dont like the yami ryou pairing at all, but you wrote it very very well. Im looking forward to day 2 ^^
person Terry
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Great addition. Man this is going to a hard competition. This is only Day One?! Can't wait til you start on Day Two, keep it up, I'll be reading.