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for Blackwater Indiscretions

by zehlyah

person Bakura
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again, I just wanted to remind you that I AM GOD.
person Yami Yugi
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yugi's been sitting on an ice pack all day. Bakura is a dead man!

Bakura: No, shit...

Grrr... just you wait til I get my hands on you, tomb robber!

Bakura: Bring it own, chicken legs!

Is this 90??? *evil grin*

person Soul to Avenge
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was an interesting chapter. but i liked it. very different and cool in its own way just like the other chapters. please come out with a new one soon
person Angeloflight
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story I do wounder will Barkura be that rough with Yugi in your next chapter, and I can't whay until you finish this story I just love it
person Velvetina
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot go Marik, he's still my fave in this fic, he's so frickin HOT!
person K
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An awesome story. I especially like the way you have portrayed Marik, certainly ooc, but in a good & believable way. Such a gentleman, respectful, & certainly the host with the most! (he he). Yami is as sensible & in control as ever, however, I can't help thinking that he could lose his cool, & freak, when he sees the state Malik is in after his night with Bakura, & knowing that Yugi is with him now. Then again, Yugi might just surprise us all. I am waiting in anticipation for the next chapter, to see what you do with them. Keep up the good work!
person Ghost dragon
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o Damn ..... I say Marik is in the lead.. Bakura is..... damn I fill bad for Ryou and Yugi!
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an AWESME STORY! b is a lot better than m. please update soon
person MarikIshtar77
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marik is right, he should fuck Ryou senseless. I'd like to see that. *grin*
As always, very wonderful!! Well worth the read, that's for fucking sure!!
Thank you!!
P.S. I'd also like to see Ryou suspended from the ceiling weraing only a cock ring. My camera would melt
from taking so many pictures! lol
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!! you like SOOO totally need to Update! that was fucking awesome!!

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