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by atemuxyuugi

person Kenz
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squirms inseat*
aww come on ! it was getting good
I like teh idea of teh games though ^.^
*blush*
I hope after this is done taht yopu'll be writing more fanfics
I do enjoy this one and hope fore it to be continued A.S.A.P.
person chi
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!
theyre 2gether!!!!!!
update update!!!!
pls pls pls!!!!
person Liliath
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HATE YOU FOR THE CLIFFY BUT I LOVE YOU FOR THAT CHAPTER AND STORY AND ALL AND OMG PLEASE UPDATE IM DYING!!!!!!!!!! T_T
person Huntershivers
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEW!! I LOVED that one!
And I must say, this Cliffie wasn't too bad. I almost expected it... and I hoped for it too, cause I was reading that Chapter together with my best friend and se is way too fast in reading.
I want to enjoy your lemon all alone at home this time *evilsmirks*
It is SO great how you describe feelings and all that! I for myself had the feeling of sitting next to Yuugi and was going to litteraly melt through the seat -_-' By the way, Haz? I'll pay for the seat ;)

I loved Jo teasing his little friend like that, though at the beginning I played with the thought of struggling him *grmbl*

I must say it makes me sad knowing that your story will come to an end now soon cause each chapter made me grinn like stupid baka for a whole week... even at work!!
So this time I'll be patient waiting for your next chapter cause I made the experience, that it is hard for me to even describe the two kissing! *is totally embarassed over herself*

Oh and I read you speak german? that grades your story up for me at least to over perfect because I didn't see anything that gives a hint to it ^^
person Egyptian Lover
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Please hurry up and update on this story. I can hardly wait to read what I know will be the best lemon ever written. I can't help but beg you to update as soon as possible. I think I'm going to die from that cliffhanger. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
person Hotaru
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've become extremely involved in this. I can't wait for the next installment. You have a few typos, but what can you expect with these chapters getting longer and longer. I'm touched by this, and extremely turned on. I find myself shivering at a few words written on the screen. I find myself smiling. You should feel proud to get such reactions from your readers. Nice job. I spent hours reading this and I wasn't disappointed.
person Ketsi
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*yells*
ARHG!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU........LEFT IT AS A CLIFFHANGER AGAIN!!!!!!! ARGH!!!!!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*growls* YOU DAMNED SADIST!! how could you do this to us again?!!! such evil cliffies!! *sniffles* anyway, this is one of the best stories that i've read in quite some time. i cant wait to read the next chapter!! so please update soon. otherwise, i'll be forced to strap you down and force you to read yamiXanzu stories all night. ^____^
person yami nefertira
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story, well done, please update soon
person person
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr! Curse you, evil cliffhanger IV! *sulks* You HAVE to update. REALLY SOON! That's just inhuman, to leave it hanging there. T_T