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by atemuxyuugi

person val-gal((/_^))
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oi, what a wonderful fic so far! I'm extreamly impressed, AU fics rarely catch my attention but I found myself really enjoying this storyline. Where you cut off in the second chapter was almost evil, but the third was so good I wasn't mad for long!^^ I'm litterally on the edge of my seat waiting for the fourth! I do hope you update soon. I know you said constructive critisicim was welcome and this hasn't really been 'constructive', but well deserved praise never hurt anybody^.-
Good wishes,
Val-gal ((/.^))
person hunterhazard
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, keep on writing.....
my curiousity is killing me....what will egyptian dreamer do now?
So please update this soon, very soon, very very soon....pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee! *puppydogeyes*
...ahem....
Haz
person Dragon Mistress
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!!! This is one of the best stories I have read that has the flirting like this does. I love it. Write more, please?
person Patusca
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT!!!WHAT IS WITH THESE CLIFFIES!!!! >< YOU MUST UPDATE!!! I MUST READ MORE!
They must meet in real life. This is an awesome fic. Keep it up and don't go leaving me hanging here to long!
Bye
person Kuk
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...great story. I MUST READ MORE. Please update soon.
person Joy & Ana
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ONG!!! MORE PLEASE!!! WILL YUGI AND YAMI( ATEMU) MEET IN THE REAL LIFE? WE HOPE SO!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
person Juuni
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great...Great work! One of my fav. fic. and you are one of my fav. writers.
I hope that Atemu and Yugi be together soon.
Please update as soon as you can.

Ja
person Nepha
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great story. Interesting and different one from the other fics. Keep up the great work. Please update soon. PLEASE. Bye
person YamixYugiLover
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG WHAT IS WITH THESE CLIFFIES!!!! EEEEERRRR!!!>< YOU MUST UPDATE!!! I MUST READ MORE! Is Yugi going to actually touch himself, ooo i hope so^^(So perverted) And now Dreamer calls him Aibou, it's so cute! They must meet in real life. This is an awesome fic. So not like others I have read which are almost the same thing every time. This has an awesome plot to it. Keep it up and don't go leaving me hanging here to long!
person Silveriss
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're such a tease. You better continue this story. I hope you're not the type of person to stop writing just because the reviews start ebbing. I've seen too many good stories discarded because people feel they aren't getting enough reviews. I can assure you that there are lots of people out there who just don't want to review because they feel they have nothing worthwhile to say. I happen to be one of those people. I don't like leaving reviews unless I feel I can contribute something. Reviews are for constructive criticism not to simply stroke egos. So.... Please continue this story! Even if I don't have anything to say each chapter. It's a great story so far. You have me hooked.