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for Brotherly LOVE

by lemontree

person Yaoi_Rox_Me_Sox
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, i'm reviewing, so write!! i want more! hehe...Mokuba you little perv you. *shakes a finger at him* oh, and i'm just a tad curious as to how old Mokuba is in the story. so, how old is he?
nice story, so write more! and maybe make the chapters longer...
person ToonMistress
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* I'm already suffereing from blood loss and there's no chapter?! Why?! 'll die if you don't update!
person ToonMistress
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waiiii!!!!! I have to be horny and need more! Just some Seto and Mokuba humping!

HM: Well you know what they say, "I'll scratch your back if you scratch mine."

I get it! I get it! Just shaddup and get on my leg!
person Kagami
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mwee! I want more! <3
person Sol@ris
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, you still want eight good reviews, before you will write the next chap? Oky, heres mine then! The chap is oky. And I really want to read more of the story! BUT ... it was way to short again! ^^
person Patrick
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on, review. The story was wonderful so far, you can't just not update!! I'm off to get an angry mob to rally to get you to write more :-P. Adios
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THE STORY! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Please make them longer and update soon....
person ToonMistress
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel the same way, Yami. Ugh. Christmas time is not a fun time. I want more sexness between the Kaiba boys! Or else I might have to resort to my yaoi overloa of Edward Elric and Mokuba!
person YEHUDIS
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sry if i disnt review (if i sis then this will add so you will update i liked it but morew will be apraciated greatly i love mokuba and seto pairing i usually read everyine that i can find and read it so pppplllleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee update thanxs
person meh
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NUUU!!!!!! THE KAIBACEST MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!