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mmm... interresting Chapter. Alltough not what I thought would come next. XD
And it seems to get more mysterious... @_@ ... Mokuba got a Millennium Item? Oh Gods... why do I get a bad feeling about that???
Well, I'm glad you are continueing the story. And I am already really curious about how the story will continue. ^^

That was a good way to get them to confess to each other... alltough I would have enjoyed it, if Seto hadn't remenbered so quickly why he had fainted... that would have been interresting. ^^

But the way Seto interrupted Mokuba, when he tried to explain the song, was really good. And the kiss that followed... aww... could you make it a little bit more detailed next time? Please? I liked the idea, though. ^^ Because first, Seto sounded as if he wasn't very happy about the song... but it ended in a kiss... great!

... mmm... I'm not so sure, if the chapter was longer than the previous where... you could still make them a bit longer, I think. I really do enjoy your writing! ^^

And I almost can't wait for the next chapter... and what happens next! So, please update soon, oky? ^^

you must write more. I am soo glad they confessed though

*glee* Seto and Mokey!
Augustin: *glares at Toon Mistress* I can't believe you! I'm Seto's true love!
You're a paranoid vampire that crys at every chance.
Augustin: *whimpers and starts crying*
See? Anyway! I loved it! I agree with Seto on the lemon. Only because I want to see Mokey all hot and bothered. *grins*
Fiend Overlord: Pedophile.
Harpie Master: *nods in agreement*
It's not pedophilia until I'm 18! And Mokuba wouldn't object!
You must continue!

That was so gr8...i wonder how mokuba will react when he realizes that seto heard him...^^...and i'm glad that you love GW...^^

:YOu. Suck. TH:e sex is nice so you can just skip to it and have them spend a very long chapter together.... The song was kinda funky though ( i really shouldn't say anything since i wouldn't have done any better) But anyway make it more *INTENSE* Lots of moaning and kissing and ...... yesss *pants* uke mokuba.... yummm!

Would you please please continue?
I'd like to know how Mokuba will react now.
They are so cute...
*admiresthemwhilewaitingforthenextchapter*

CU nightland

So, you finally got enough reviews to update, great! ^^
The chap is neat... Mokuba singing a love song about Seto, and him listenig to it... and then collapsing. I would love to see that... *grins*
BUT... the chapter was WAY to short this time! Really, you should write longer ones!
Until now, though, I like the way the story is going. Hope, you get your reviews soon so you update again! ^^

cya, Sol@ris

lklkl;'k

Just update, dammit! It's a pain in the ass when authors obviously have a fic ready but won't upload the chaps because they want more reviews.