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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good way to express yourself mokuba! very smart. But next time make sure that person does not hear you! YOUR BUSTED!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW how sweat! They finally confess their love for eachother!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! no sex
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I had no idea mokuba was that scared of those movies...
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW they're sleeping together!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! ><
Why did they just fall asleep??? T___T
Where's the lemon scene? xD
Go on, go ahead XD
Greez
Naomi ^^
Why did they just fall asleep??? T___T
Where's the lemon scene? xD
Go on, go ahead XD
Greez
Naomi ^^
schedule
May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was interesting ... the two of them watching a movie and Mokuba turning to his brother when it got scary. And then the chocolate that Mokuba offered to Seto ... mmm ... that was yummie! ^^
I was a little surprised about Mokubas question at the end, that he wanted to sleep in the bed of his brother ... but Seto kept cool (for now ^^).
The next chapter could get very interesting ... I'm already looking forward to it! ^^
I was a little surprised about Mokubas question at the end, that he wanted to sleep in the bed of his brother ... but Seto kept cool (for now ^^).
The next chapter could get very interesting ... I'm already looking forward to it! ^^
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, it really impressed me. You have a lot of potential in my opinion, and if you just keep working at it, you could blow us all way. Keep up the wonderful work
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story can't wait to see more of it.. update soon
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile. Great chapter, it really got me. I hope you do play more into the Evan angle, something like blackmail or the such, it would really add a whole new dimension to the story. Wonderful work as always, keep it up.