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for Goodbye

by Aten

person Essentielle
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww shit ;___;
that was really sad!
oh, I wish that Marik's blood ran cold when he felt his hikari death >.<
oooh! *tooks her knife*
if he would have touched Malik again, I would have had to kill him >.<
...but I hadn't, because I would have had the hope that Marik will stop beating and start loving Malik *drop*
hate it when he hates him. (but not when in the end he loves him xD)
person Essentielle
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue! right! *forgot to say this*
please continue xD
I know, there isn't much space, but... Malik could survive, or Marik could go to search him, for whatever reason xD
person Kat1132
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to see what Marik will think when he gets home. Did he hear his hikari's thoughts as Malik was killing himself? excetera. This is great as a oneshot but I would really appreciate it if you would continue.
person The Empress
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO! Marik! *tears flowing like waterfalls out of eyes* By the way, I like the story, but....NOOOOOO! Malik. *crying eyes out*
person MarikIshtar77
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love old Floyd...

anyway- OUCH! poor Malik! Honestly though, I would have done the same thing. Short, Sweet and to the point- uh..no pun intended!
person Nocturne22
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SOBS* Cannot believe you had him do that! Poor Malik! Please make another chapter soon!

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