rate_review Reviews

I like this very much from the beginning! I want to see more Marik, however, and I want to know why Seto and Jou aren't really getting along. *smirk* Nice work!

OH, PLEASE Continue! I Love this Story. It was great the way you didn't mess around and got strait to teh Lemon before the story, much thanks for that. I'm really into it now, I'd Love to read how it ends. Don't Stop writing.

....wow.....thats all i have to say is.......wow.....and.......this is an awesome story..........of course, the next lemon that you do /could/ be a little longer ^.~ (you know you don't have to put more than one or two lemons in a single chapter, my dear writer^^ of course....if you want to its all good^^)...........i dont know why, but the use of a fantasy landscape with familiar characters is just so great!^^ and you have made this fantasy story even better........have you read the fanfic 'Unknowns'?..........its by RachelDracon(i hope i spelled the right *cringes at the thought of not getting it right*)andi think that you might like it^^ it might help you if you get (god forbid) writer's block............so.......yah.......i love this story, and it'd be great if you can post as soon as you can *looks sheepish at her selfishness* not to sound like i dont understand if you have a lot of work or anything *blush*............*holds out a basket of yugioh plushies* here you go! to help you write^^.........maybe they will come up with ideas or something^.~..........well, g2g *hugs*.......Ja ne!

W00t, battle scenes rule. lemons are better, but take what you can get, right?

Pretty interesting plot...though the angel thing has been done before, I am interested in your OC, Seraph; she sounds like a fun gal! I am also excited to see how Jou and Ryou deal with their significant others (seeing as how Yugi seems to have no problems with Yami) and how their relationship will blossom out...hope to hear more from you soon! Ja! ^_0

great chapter
can't wait to see what happens next
keep up the good work and update soon

I loved it. Update soon.

UPDATE!!!!!! I like this story, it's cool! I hope that you will update. As I said I like your story and I really want you to continue. You're doing a great job with writing this. I also hope that you will not leave this fic, it's too good! So update soon. See ya!

'Tis cool, I like it. I look foward to reading the next chapter.

(is still getting over the longer lemons)
WOW, you are really good. I love it all. *gives another cookie.* Hope to see more soon. Can`t wait to see who the outsiders are.