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for Broken Darkness

by Crystal56

person Silvershadowfire
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be interesting. Yugi's made a few Freudian slips...maybe that will clue Yami into what's going on in his head. Are you going to bring the mind-link back?

Ja!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*holds up the grahm crackers and chocolate* Smores if anyone flames! Great chapter!! They are both so confused! And that is actually how it would be for something like that to happen..scary and confusing. Great job and can't wait for the next update!!
person DracOnyx
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitly want to read more of this now that I've discovered it. please do continue.


DracOnyx
person ecristy85
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
take anzu out of this story!!!! pleeeaassseeee!!!!!!! i'll keep reading if you promise to complete this story and never leave it unfinished ^^

AH! YAMI REMEMBERD SOMETHING!!!! OMG!!!! Yuugi is a dumbass, he should acknowledge his feelings of love for Yami!!!!
person ecristy85
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keeping the chapters short huh!??!?! YOU BIG MEANIE!!!! T_T
person ecristy85
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez, poor Yami, he's sick to the core!!! Well i realized you made Yami almost the same size as Yuugi, but you see here, i have this obsession with making him a lot bigger (phisically) than Yuugi, THEY ARE SOO CUTE!!!!!!! ->_<-
person Leigh
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This story had me in it's grip from the first paragraph. PLEASE update soon?! This is soooo wonderful!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There's no reason to rush the yaoi. They have to get Yami well before they can think of that kind of stuff. I'm glad you updated so quick!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Poor Yami. He can't remember... I hope Yugi can take him home and nurse him back to health soon! Please update!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great! I like how your doing this and can't wait to see what comes next!!