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for Broken Darkness

by Crystal56

person DracOnyx
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just like Kaiba . . . gods, did I ever mention how much I despise that ass sometimes!? Yami needs to just come out and tell Yugi how he feels, and Yugi needs to fricking admit to himself that he is definitely gay, or at least bi. Oy, will people never learn that keeping secrets only causes more problems! GAH!

Anyway, great chapter, and I hope you update soon.

DracOnyx
person hime-hermione
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese continieu???
i really liked it and i'm looking forward to the next chapter :D
person ecristy85
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make anzu a lesbian, but don't make her glump over Yami PLEASE!!! T_T, oh and i liked how you showed Kaiba, as the bastard he is, won't you make him go with Jou? ^____^

more Yugi/yami action please!!! and it would be nice if the others stayed out of the way for a while
person DracOnyx
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter didn't suck, but I did think Kaiba's reaction was a little off. Ahh well, author's perogative, ne? more soon please.

DracOnyx
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good chapter!! Poor Yugi! I wonder how long he can hide everything though? Update soon please!!!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man - Kaiba knows now? I can actually understand Yugi's reluctance to tell the others, after all, he doesn't want to 'overtax' Yami, now does he? *wink*

Thanks for the chapter, and please continue when you can!
person Cherazz
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic! Hehe, I want more now! I like the concept that Yami cannot remember anything at all but Yugi's name, and is gradually remembering other things;) I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the yaoi;) Great work!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes its great! And the fact that you are establishing a story, personalities and such without just jumping into relationships and lemons is a good thing! Gives more depth to a story like this one.
person hunterhazard
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I just wanna say , that i love your story....please keep on writing.... Very good idea and good writing style i also have to add. And I'm curious, which way your fic is going to lead us...:)
Haz
person ITALIANA
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! yami loves yugi? oh yes, great! I want a lemon YugiXyami!