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for Broken Darkness

by Crystal56

person darkness_of_angelic
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!
i love this story!!^^ nice work^^
plz, update soon.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that dream doesn't mean that Yami only has another month in the living world with Yugi; that would suck. I hope it means he has to do something (like admit his feelings) within a month or he will have to go back to the underworld.

Anyway, great couple of chapters, and I'll look foreward to your update on Sunday!
person Yana
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yugi tell him
person Cherazz
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a fun chapter! They had a blast at the park! And I'm so excited that they have their connection back! *squeals* Yugi said he loves Yami! *dances around happily* I can't wait until he really hears it:) That ending kind of creeped me out:( I hope nothing bad happens to poor Yugi:( Sniff, I can't wait til next Sunday! Hehe, I wanna know what happens now! Great work!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait!! Great chapter!!!

Ohhhhhh...time to guess!! WOOT!
Okay..I'm guessing Yami was allowed to come back..but he and Yugi had to admit their feelings for each other before a month was out or he has to go back..and not having his memories when coming back makes it harder..^^..okay..that is my guess!

I can't wait to find out how close I am!!
person huntershivers
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so... well... I kinda really liked that part very much ^^
especially because we can see some of yamis thoughts as well *smiles*
And I am thinking about whether or not teh "dream"-Yugi is totally out of Yamis thoughts or if ther is a little bit about the link, too!

ARGH! I hope you understand what I mean... though I'm reading very much english by now, my writing sucks... last english lesson was at least 6 years ago -_- *glomps herself to a little ball ans sobbs quietly*
person Cherazz
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I love this chapter the most! The much anticipated lemon, hehe, even though it wasn't real, it was still nice *evil grin* That was pretty damn good for your first Yu-gi-oh lemon;) I'm so glad Yami has almost all of his memories...to be honest, I thought the pace was going a little too slow...I'm very anxious for their relationship to begin:P Great work!
person YaoiPimp
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I'm revieing sooo uber much! I'm just now reading it and I'm putting things as I go along. And now for mai review:
WHYYYYYYYY? I heart Seto soooo very uber much! that is all.
FANCY<3

oh yeah, are you going to put other yaoi couples in here?
person YaoiPimp
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh......Yami reminds me of Chi from Chobits! That's so cute!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job!!!..^^