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for Broken Darkness

by Crystal56

person Silvershadowfire
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, where did Yami get to? He couldn't have gone too far in his weakened condition...
person huntershivers
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEW!! I NEVER excpected to get the next chapter THAT fast!
I must say I mentally kicked Yugi for just saying nothing... that is very hard...
Poor little Yami... I start to understand the whole title... I just hope he wnt out or something...
PLEASE don't let him dissapear or anything like that! *starts to rip her hair at the thought of it*

I swear I will cry if that happens *sniff*

and something offtopic... I showered an hour ago and it is so DAMN hot, that I could possibly sleep in the refrigerator the whole day... (35°C don't ask me the Fahrenheit thing...)
person ecristy85
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT!!! DON'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T_T

youuu, you really like to tease us, poor and innocent-like-sheep readers, don't youuuuuu?? >_<
person Angel Kawaii
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! Why?!?? Where did he go?? Please update soon! The suspense is killing me! Ja! ^^
person Cody Thomas
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, how can you leave off there?! I hate cliffies, they are evil!hhurry and update! I'm sorry I haven't been around for awhile, my hours got doubled at work so I haven't even been online to check my email. But wow, I had alot of really good chappies to read today. keep it up, make all your fans ecstatically happy, and email me when you post a new chappie!
person huntershivers
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
how come you all do cliffies to kill me with my curiosity??? ARGH! I can't believe none of them gets their mouth open and just tell the other!!
That must be a "Y" thing... oh well... that were actually two new chapters for me, for I couldn't read 14 til now.
I love that story. Hope it will have a happy end and one of them will tell the other... otherwise I will *glares like Bakura*
person Tal
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi

Oh my! Oh how could you leave it there?! will he live? will Yugi tell him he loves him? Oh this is a great stry so pelase you must continue!

;__; have a good night..
person Sadistic Suicdal Teen
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WILL KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!
I WANT MORE!!!
damn cliffys
person Angel Kawaii
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LPG: Noooooo! How could you leave it there! You're evil! Evil I tell you!
Kage: Get over yourself! *smacks head*
LPG: Ow! Quit! I just love this story is all. Please please please update soon! Ja ne! ^^
Kage: Creepy...
person Silvershadowfire
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, but *pulls on hair in frustration* I WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON! Argh...this is driving me nuts!

So if you could please update? When you can? Thank you!