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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sould be a separate story. Too many chapters in one story can be hard to plow through. It would also give those of us who can't stop reading something 'til the we come to the end a stopping point so we can get to bed ;-). BTW, thanks for giving Atemu his Egyptian body; I think he's at his sexiest with tanned skin and khol highlighting his eyes.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For the record, I vote that you start a new story for the sequel.
Interesting conditions for Atem's return to life - I thought the first might be it, but I wasn't expecting the other 2. At least she let Yami and Yugi get away with a techinicalitly....
Thanks for all the hard work on the story, and I'll be looking forward to the sequel!
Interesting conditions for Atem's return to life - I thought the first might be it, but I wasn't expecting the other 2. At least she let Yami and Yugi get away with a techinicalitly....
Thanks for all the hard work on the story, and I'll be looking forward to the sequel!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just had to come over again and see what was left out lol... I worte my main review on ff.net but I will say again I was really inmpressed with your work as an author and look forward to the next part. I won't vote second time out of fairness, but I will most definitely be waiting for the sequel...
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool idea, draws the reader in, i already want to read more!!!
keep writing!!!
MR
keep writing!!!
MR
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoah! this is a stunning turn of events!!! way cool!!!
MR
(oh and it is NOT MR as in Mr Soandso because im a girl, it's MR for mysteryreaper!)
MR
(oh and it is NOT MR as in Mr Soandso because im a girl, it's MR for mysteryreaper!)
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HE'S NOT THERE?! Where'd he go? *freaks out and runs around in circles*
...ahem. ^_^;; Sorry, but this story is just too amazing! Please update again soon. ^^
...ahem. ^_^;; Sorry, but this story is just too amazing! Please update again soon. ^^
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to check out what you hinted at being missed in the FFN version. Nice- Not bad at all. I am guessing like all decent author's the biggest is yet to come and I will be looking forward to it. Thank you for sharing this story.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE THIS OR DIE!!!!!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh!!! Evil evil evil!!! What are you doing to me? Poor Yami! Come back! Yugi loves you! Don't die either:P Hehe:P This is excellent Crystal;) Great work! I just read the 4 recent chapters and they were awesome! Yay! Hehe, nice part with Seto too:P
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!