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for Broken Darkness

by Crystal56

person Zoe
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! XDXDXD That was great...poor Yami...and I just got done reading a story where -Yugi- had gotten pregnant. o__o; Can't wait to read what it is/how it happens! ^__^
person Tal
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Good ending ^^ I always looked foreward to reading this, Keep on writing. And I vote for number 2 This story was good and all, but I would much rather read Kaiba's and Jou's story then a sequel to this one, a KaibaxJou sotry and a nice epilogy would be good. ^_^" well that is my vote. So 2 for me.
person Angel Kawaii
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods!! Yes!! I wanted Yami to get pregnant it came through! I don't think I put that on my review though...Ah well I'll be waiting for the next sequel and I just cannot wait to see what you have planned! Oh Ra!! lmao I'll see ya then! Ja ne! ^^
person Angel Kawaii
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2!! I want #2! It's a lot better If I say so myself. I enjoyed this story so much! I can't wait to see what you have planned for Seto and Jou! I'll be waiting for the last chapter of this and the next story!! Ja ne!! ^____________________________^
person Kizutsuita
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Start the sequel on a separate story and put up and epilogue here ^^
person K
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for a wonderful story. I was dreading, at some points, that it was going to have a sad ending, & so glad it didn't. I love the way you write. BTW, in response to ecristy85, on the subject of guys having babies, I was unsure of how the baby could be born, also. However, I read one story a while back, where Inuyasha got preg, & when the baby was due, he turned demon, ripped the baby out with his claws, & it went flying through the air!!!!!! Can't imagine Yugi or Atemu doing anything quite like THAT, though!
person Red Dragon oF Egypt
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: just do a sequel seperate from this one if u will like how Dragondreamer and Yamidragon did for there stories or how any author to a story does sequels gtg now keep u the great work and UPDATE SOON pls ^_^ hehe gtg now JA NE
person MysteryReaper
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sequel in another story!!!
person ecristy85
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
number 2!!!!!!!!!

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MPREG... uggghh.... @_@ (not that i'm against it, but i don't see where the poor baby would come out) well, no, i have an idea but still...

i really liked this fic, and i think that time witch was a real pain in the *ss. >_<
person Sarah Costa
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I love it. Yami make a deal with Kana interesting... Who will carry the child? I hope is Yugi and not Yami. It seems more right that Yugi carry the child and not Yami. Make a epiloge to this story and make the sequel separate please. Ja ne

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