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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is one damn awesome sweet lemon! I love it!! I love it so much, your on my favorites list!! Great lemon! Are you going to cntinue it?!?!? PLEASE DO!!!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Spelling...check. Punctuation...check. All in all, good..for a first timer. ;-) A note for next time, though- the ending is a little abrupt. Yes, they came, but then what? Adding a scene of the 'afterglow' (even if it's just a kiss or a "You were good.") helps bring the fic to a sense of closure.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a very good one at that lol anyways keep up the good work and i hope to see more Malik/Marik Stories! anyways gatta go ja mata.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoot!!! *Cheers!* Lisha's first lemon!!! *Giggles insanely* >_> And hopefully not the last...
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good! heheh. I like that paring. You did a good job, but it felt jumpy in some parts. It was great overall...I am realy craving for some BDSM right now and you just helped meh some... n_n! Thankies~