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for In the Arms of My Brother

by POPS

person mokie
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!!! I love both of the chapters on your story. Please update soon! Good work!
person Platerair Queen
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Howdy hey! :D:D:D Since ff.net decided to be a dickhead again and delete your story, I will just review it here! Whee! I'm on Sherry's comp at the moment - IT'S FRIDAY!! Remember the time I went to read your story on this site and I went on the compy while Norton was on?! Well, guess what? I'm on!! And reveiwing!! Hahahaha!

Nehz, you already know my wonderful opionion of this chapter, so I shall dutifully go forward!!

~Charge~ *trumpets blare in the background* *and then you see a horse with Nichole on it, riding away into the sunset, toward the title of Chapter 2 you see floating in the sky*

"NEIGH!!!"
person Platerair Queen
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~Life goes on in the blah... something something!~ I don't know! heehee! I had the Japanese song of Gundam Destiny in my head at the moment. Yes, it's me again! SURPRISE!!! :D:D:D =D I just got back on the comp after our dog pile on the couch, whilst I injured my crotch with the back of the couch and promptly dropped to the ground after rolling. Hahaha!

This chapter was a great read! I really enjoyed it! And why does Seto obsess over Kisara? And all that good stuff. Its kinda creepy if you ask me with his website on her. Like... he's really obsessive in his own imaginary world. When did he first start REALLY obsessing over her? :D Cool story so far! Keep it up! I rated it the highest rating! Don't know if it got through though. The companion of ff.net can be so stupid sometimes like it's counterpart that it's not funny. I hate when both sites do that!! Nehz, contact me when you posted up another chapter, can't wait to read and review the next one!! :D:D