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for In the Arms of My Brother

by POPS

schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please tell me your going to continue! I'm totally hooked on this story and really want to read more of it! I love how things don't seem to be as perfect as they appear at first glance. Seth and Yami are obviously much more devious and maniacal than I would have first guessed and I'm very interested to know what they are planning, not to mention what Seto had to save Kisara from before! This is a wonderful story and I hope that you'll continue with it someday!
person Samurai
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I beg you to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (It's rare I beg anyone to do something, Consider yourself lucky.) I need to know what happens. And wasn't Kisara the name of High Priest Seth's Blue-Eyes White Dragon in Ancient Egypt?
person rikku
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's about time u updated. i had almost forgotten about this story, but i'm glad u updated. anyway i can't wait to find out what yami and seth's plan is. and when kisara and seto are going to get together and just do it. it's so obvious that he likes her and she likes him. but if they knew they liked each other then u wouldn't have a story. so update soon and i mean soon^_*
person Platerair Queen
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? What an asshole! He's very inconsiderate to her, no wonder she's thinking about someoneelse.

Hm... But it was a VERy good chapter, don't worry! Seth's just being a bum. hhah!

Can't wait for chapter 3 to come out! Wheee!! :D:D

~Rin~
person rikku
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
allo. please update ur story, because u haven't updated in like forever!!!!!! so please update soon!!!!!!^_^
person rikku
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi again. i just want to say to hurry up and update the story!!!!! i want to see what happens. and i hope u have the next chapter focus on kisara and seto more. oh well like i said hurry up and update. bye
person rikku
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello i like the story, but u really dont need to add the part where it gives all the info on people. except maybe in the first chapter. then u can make the chapters longer. no offense^_^
person Coley
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start ^_^ I can't wait to see how it turns out!
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know?? i wanne know more!
don't you update??? lol....
no really i'm intrested...
GIMME GIMME GIMME ...
person alyssa
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome fan fic. cant wait for the next chap. although i could do with out the incredibly long openig. so yah ounce again awsome story and post next chap up soon