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It was great! I really loved it. I thought at 1st that Marik was being condescending by calling Malik Honey all the time but it was really sweet how patient he was. lol

It's been what? Nearly a year since I've read this and I'm just Now reviewing it? Damn I'm a lazy bitch.
Bakura/Ryou was my first and to this day still, my favorite duo, but this fic put Marik/Malik right up there with them. I love how you portrayed them in this story, you write Malik accurately, he has his problems (many of them) but instead of letting them define his entire character you write him like an actual person. And a male at that. The majority of writers seem to give characters an unrealistic personality, or they make out the male characters (like Ryou... especially Ryou) to be flat chested girls that happen to have a penis. This is one of the reasons I find your stories so refreshing. And Marik… I just wanted to molest the guy. Again, you gave him a well rounded (for a psychotic demon) personality, instead of slapping on the cliché “mindless buffoon” swill that many authors use for him, which pisses me off, since it does him no justice, and shows a complete lack of creativity… And I’m ranting now, so let’s wrap this up. You kick all kinds of ass and your fic is Gold. I hope you continue to write in this fandom, and with these characters.

Wow. Great fic. Steamy lemony goodness.
Lmfao @ the old lady at the door. hilarious. Marik has no shame. Although..neither do Bakura and Ryou apparently *snicker*

It definetly wasnt a shitty fic ^^
*skips off to re-read*

I love you!! You are my favorite YGO author, EVER!!!! I'm addicted to all your stories adn this one tops it!^_^ It was angsty, real, lovelrly ,and SMUTTY! YAY!! I love it!!

O. M. G. XD This was GREAT. It's so hard to ever find Marik/Malik... and ditto with Bakura/Ryou where Bakura is still acting like himself. I love the ending, I love this story, God... And the ice cream? Genius. Ice cream is teh nummies. ^_^

GAH! I LOVE IT!!!!!!

LOL. Loved it. Once again another great fic ^^ Especially the part with the old lady XDD

Holy crap, that was awesome! I laughed so hard I'm sure the people outside began to wonder what the hell's going on in here. Marik not being a dick...never thought I'd see the day. You pulled it off wonderfully. Kudos!

Whew. That was hot. And fabulous!

*gives you thumbs up and hauls Malik out back*

That wasn't a shitty chappie! I <3 it!
Yumm...chocolate truffle ice cream is yummy!
I can't wait till ur next update! This story is great...keep it up!
~*peace~*