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for Engulfed in Shadows

by Ravenx

person Sarah Costa
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! What happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne.
person Juuni
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY! Well nothing bad happen in this chapter...who is the bad guy in this story? What Happen next? UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! Ja ne.
person Aiden
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I loved the last chapter especially Ryou and Bakura's last lines. Can't wait for the next update.
person Crazy Demon
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bakura is such a horndog, I love it XD!!! Marik amuses me because he's... big protective gay man. Good stuff. Seto is the man... like okay, Seto is my favorite "husband" considering... he just kicks ass all around. Yami, in general, is my favorite "husband" but as you write a little less of him than the others, my favorite for this fic would def have to be Seto. The wifies (maaaates) are all cute... Athan and Brennan are little brats XD OKAY. That was about FIVE cents so... Rock ON with ya bad self!
person Camille
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryo! He has three kids instead of two! Oy! I am still wanting to know what happened between Marik and Bakura! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Shinigami24
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* Looks like Raia, and the twins are copying their dads...What's up with Marik and Bakura fighting/ When will they make up? Is it the enemy? Who's the enemy? Peggy and Dartz are dead!
person jadedkatrina
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie as always and it seems that Ryou is the heavy hand
of discipline in his and Bakura's relationship. But anyways sorry for
the short review, but I'm half asleep right now...

update soon

Jadedkatrina

person anubiset
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, you could`ve let them have a little fun behind the curtain.

I loved it. Ryou and Bakura`s kids are just like Bakura, well, maybe a little more laid back. Not much. They are just too cute. Don`t tell them I said that.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like the twins are a bit spoiled... Fun chapter, though. The families are getting huge! I hope the pool party goes well.
But what's up with Marik and Bakura?
person Deathbalce
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok Im confuse who is son of who, granchild of who, who mary who @__@
its a big family jajajaj:P
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!