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Wonderful chapter as usual... and we are finding out little
things about the twins that their fathers didn't even know
about.... Anyways who is this 'Evil' that is plaguing the
mansion and taking off with the kids of the majestics and
their mates... Also will Ryou become pregnant again or is the
twins the only ones for them....

Oh and go ahead and send the twins after the white haired
bishies... I have a trap set just for them... more torture
subjects... so anyways update soon or find out just how evil
I can get when torturing hot bishies...

Ja Ne

Jadedkatrina

Ohhhh man! Little (and big) boys dropping left and right! Well, it's shadows... shadow magic? Is this some unknown enemy? Will we ever find the boys? And what will their fathers say!? All in the next exciting episode of... *stops* Yeah, I'm okay. SO! Omg, yay you wrote Y/YY <33333 and Yami only wins when Yugi's there <3 How cute. Anyway, more yays. I shall await the next chapterpatiently! Rock ON with ya bad self.

P.S. It's obviously not Noa ^^;;

Another great chapter but now I'm really curious and I love how Joey gets called grandma, it's just so cute. Hope to see more soon.

The Shadow gets the Bakura twins and then a few hours later, it begs Bakura and Ryo to take them back. I can't wait to read more!

Who? What? Where? How? Why? Does that cover it? I think so. Where are they and who took them?
I love Athan and Brennon. They are cute. Who are they going to hook up with?

Nuuuuuuu! What happened to Hikaru and Zemti?! Please update soon! I won't be able to hold the suspense for so long! Great lemons btw XD.

*shrugs* Okay with me! But why not put truth serum in both Marik and Bakura's food? Then they'll 'fess up to everyone the reasons why they fight in the 1st place, then everyone can make them stop fighting, or find a solution then! And as for Hikaru and Zemti, Marik, Malik, Atemu and Yugi will panic big time! Wait... shadow magic? Does this mean the enemy is Zork?! I dunno his name, but Atemu fought him at the end of the manga, in the Egyptian arc!

I LOVE IT! LEMONS YUMMY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON: JA NE.

I'm sorry for not reviewing the second chapter but i don't had time to read it when you update. I love both chapters. And a lot of lemons!! YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!! But what happen to hikaru and Zemti? Pease update soon. Ja ne.

Another enemy to contend with. If he kidnaps Bakura's kids, he is going to be their parents to take them back. ;) Ryo really needs to teach them manners! He must want to bang their heads against the wall. Can't wait for the next part!