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Oh my ... I hate scary stories and I'm easy to scare. I hate the feeling of ... just imagine to lose your own children like this.
However I liked the scenes of the Bakura-family ... really sweet and ... somehow it suits them just well; just how they are.

OMG!! hi, i loved this story, all of them, are you against incest... or twincest? i think that you should do a story where Brennen and Athen get together, cuz thats the way it looked like you were going with this story... and i think they would be sooooo cute, right?

Loved your trilogy! And thanks for the website with characters their relationships and ages - so helpful. I already miss your special fantasy world, but so glad you wrote these stories. Enjoyed every minute of it.

Loved your trilogy! And thanks for the website with characters their relationships and ages - so helpful. I already miss your special fantasy world, but so glad you wrote these stories. Enjoyed every minute of it.

Hi Ravenx, how are you? I don’t even know how to begin this review. I’ve read your Engulfed trilogy about ten times already and words cannot even begin to describe how much I love it. In fact even if I could find the words, it would still be lacking. It isn’t just your prose that has me enthralled but your story is like something straight from my own imagination. Your story just bonded with my inner muse and she’s been going crazy. You’d probably think I’m crazy and honestly putting this into words (which I’ve never done before), I wouldn’t blame you but ever since reading your stories, at night before I go to sleep I think about it and continue from where you left off, adding new people, making new plots, playing around with your characters. You and your stories are like kindered spirits to me, and it’s so seldom something like that happens. Do you understand what I mean? The whole mpreg thing, the lovely children, the harmony tinged with a little drama within each family and among friends. It’s absolutely straight out of my mind!! I read it and I just couldn’t believe it I found a writer who I could connect so well with!! And being a total 100% Seto-Joey shipper I am so in love with Drake and Brayden. I remember you saying something abt adding side stories to your trilogy. Would you consider expanding Drake and Saiai’s relationship, perhaps a one shot of them getting together, their first nite together? And Brayden, there just isn’t enough of him, my imagination is trembling in hunger for more of that sweet, sweet vampire. Pls do a scene of some brotherly interaction between Drake and Brayden. And you must add a love interest for him, I see…. Athan!! Hee hee hee… what else can I say, Bakura’s kids are impossible!! (But we love them anyway) Oh and the coming together of Seto and Joey in the prequel to the trilogies was absolutely beautifully done. The scene where he has Joey sitting on his lap and him stroking the blond’s thigh has me melting!! And don’t even get me started on the lemon scenes… I love everything you’ve written on Seto and Joey. Oh!! And the scene where Joey’s pregnant and he goes to Yugi’s room and then Drake walks in and goes ‘don’t hey me. You’re not suppose to…’ Scene was wonderful!! And I loved it when Seto carried Joey into the pool room and how he’s always calling Joey ‘his’ puppy. Oh Oh!! And when Joey was comatose (I nearly cried, I was so scared you were going to kill him off) and Drake and Seto had that conversation abt what Brayden would be when he grew up and how proud Seto was of Drake, that touched straight to my core. Please, please fixed the horrible injustice done to joey and let him be able to get pregnant again!! Do you not like the Seto/Joey pairing very much? Is that why things are so difficult for him (i.e. getting pregnant and now not being able to get pregnant). I was just wondering coz you write their scenes so beautifully. Please don’t be angry with me for making these suggestions, its just that I love your trilogy world so much, I don’t want it to end. And as I have said my muse is going crazy with plots originating from your characters. And don’t worry I would never presume to write using your characters, it would be unethical and if it happened to me I’d throw a bitch fit for real!! However if you do want to continue and would like some ideas to help you along, don’t even hesitate to ask me, I’d be SO HAPPY to help you!! Wow, I’ve written a really long review haven’t I? alrite, I’ll stop here. I’m the middle of reading your Destiny story now, and I can’t wait for that one to finish as well, so I can write another long review to you ;-). So till then, don’t stop writing!! Luvs Az

After reading the triology I have only 1 thing to say. YOUR STORIES ROCK MY SOCKS!!!!!!!!!

That was awesome, all three of the stories are actually! Shadows, hmm, very intriguing. And once again happy they're all together again! ^_^ Heh, Brennan and Athan are one hell of a pair, definitely Baku's kids, no doubt there. It'd be interesting to see them paired together, yep white haired bishies are just awesome! lol. Can't wait to read any of your side stories. Till next time. ^_~

ok i read all three and loved them your amzing writer keep up the good work!

I want to know when you add the side stories! Please send me an e-mail! And I loved the trilogy. Ja ne!

That was wonderful... too bad no one else became pregnant,
like Ryou for instance, but anyways... I can't wait to read your
side stories to this trilogy and perhaps some day you will write
another story to go along with the last three... Anyways keep on
writing... loving it greatly...

gotta go

jadedkatrina

ps... can't wait for the side stories... you'd better make them quick
or else I will start to torture the twins...

Ja Ne