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by lemontree

person ToonMistress
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Toon Mistress: Well the chapters are getting longer. That's always a good thing!
Harpie Master: *playing strip duelling against Yami, Bakura, Marik, and Seto, and winning* Yeah... Hah! I win again!
TM: *grabs HM's deck* What did I say about strip duelling without me?
HM: That if I do it, to take pictures.
TM: Right. *sticks her tongue out at HM*
HM: What was your rule on sticking tongues out?
TM: *pushes her tongue back into her mouth and grins* What tongue? Anyway, Yami! We still love the story! *grins* Someone should molest Pegasus. I vote for Joey or Malik!
HM: Is it just me, or do you love Pegasus more than me?
TM: You love Mai, so I can love my Pegasus. *holds up a plushie of Pegasus* How can you not love this face? *squeezes the plushie*
Pegasus Plushie: *squeak*
TM: You have to write more Yami! And your Hikari's a bit of a slave driver. And short chapters are nothing to be ashamed of, I write mine too long and never finish stories that way.
person nicky
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love party games! They are wonderful if you wanna make people do things they don't really want...
There should be a party game challenge! Is there?
Anyway... keep writing, I really wanna know more about the dares and the questions!
person morgie
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey
this is good, but pleas finish this story. i love story's like this
person ToonMistress
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Toon Mistress: *glee* Pegasus! My widdle Pegasus! Come on Pegasus go down on Bakura! Or Joey, or Seto, or anyone really. He's so sexy!
Harpie Master: I don't mind Joy and Seto pairings, but no Pegasus.
TM: Oh hush. Pegasus is the best. He's so great with toons! Adn he has spellcasters so in keeping with my Pegasus theme, I can have my Toon/Spellcaster deck!
HM: You can't use Dark Magician in that deck because he doesn't use Dark Magician.
TM: At least I get Toon Dark Magician Girl! *shows off said card* No using her in Mai's Harpie deck!
HM: No! I want Toon Dark Magician Girl! *tries to grab her*
TM: First you have to admit that Pegasus is all powerful and I get to use Obnoxious Celtic Guardian.
HM: No! You can't use my Obnoxious! But I'll admit that Pegasus has a good deck.
TM: Well we love the story!*glee* More Pegasus!
person gaijin-chan
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK. I'm reviewing. I'd love to read more.
person Kaan Formidilosus Volans
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Cool first chapter! Shame about the length though... write the next chapter already- I wanna know what happens next!

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