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for Sleepover

by lemontree

person Terry
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Bakura with makeup on, hilarious. Really short, but you update every other day so I'll survive.
P.S. I miss Gundam Wing so much! Especially Duo.
person Joey Wheeler
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE IT WAS AWESOME!
person Yamima
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really fucked up keep writing I like it so far
person ToonMistress
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TM: Still reading this! How could Ryou NOT tell that Yugi was gay?
HM: How come YOU never told me that you've dated women before?
TM: Faryn told you that from the finger puppet story. DUH! And I think your Hikari is a bit of a slave driver.
HM: You're so lazy.
TM: I control your sex life, so keep your mouth shut about my being lazy.
HM: But you have costumes to work on.
TM: I need my vacation from school!
HM: YOU OVERWROTE MY DUELISTS OF THE ROSES FILE!!!
TM: I said I was sorry! Besides, I got Harpie Lady back and three Dark Magicians.
HM: Okay. Malik seems a bit OOC to me.
TM: I make Joey smart in my fanfic with the Seto/ Joey pairing. We can makes them OOC if we want!
TM&HM: We want more!
person nicky
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well the story is kind of... whacky? yeah, a little overdone... but still funny
I liked the part with the bets... And the "will you marry me?" - "I said DARE!"... lol
Maybe you wanna make it even better with not only writing down what they say but also what they do, like their facial expressions or gestures or stuff, maybe even thoughts... that'd be really interesting
person Naria
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! MY SPLEEN!!! I CAN'T BREATHE!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!!

Whew! ^_^; I feel better now...Wow, I haven't laughed that hard in a long time!! Good times goin' on here, good times!! I can't wait for more to come out!! ^_^

Seto acting like a dog...*snort* CORKSCREW!! AHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAA!!!
person JoeyWheeler
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICS EVER!!! IT HAS ALL OF MY FAVORITE COUPLES! THE only thing is I thought Marik was the NON-yami and MaLik was the yami. But I may be wrong anyways, I MUST READ SOME MORE!!! UPDATE!!! *HUGS*
person Terry
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seto going "woof woof"? That is more appealing than i ever thought it would be. yes, please update soon.
person Sarah Costa
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! So funny!!! I like it! Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne.
person nicky
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is disappointed too*... why did yugi stop them?????????
But I like the whoop whoop!