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by lemontree

person Naria
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm....Ishtar sex.... =_= It makes me happy in my pants....Like Yami....

MORE! MORE, I SAY!! And when's breakfast?! When is there going to be bishies berakfast sex in the pancakes?! Hm?! Write, you two crazies, WRITE!! Or you'll face the wrath of my WRATH!! Yeah...
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: u can say that again sheesh i think that eventually must have been a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong eventually especially for yami tisk tisk tisk you naughty man its a good thing yugi was passed out then otherwise i can just see it now (yugi tearing off after yami with a broom or something in his hands)hehe well great chappie definitly bordering perverted and w/e comes after that not that i want to know mind ya now for a new ficcy well hmmm maybe we could say have darts in on this one with marik and malik joining in and they have this incredible urge to take control of everyone and make them do things that are out of character but no unliked by the one there doing it to like say ryou make more evil sounding than bakura that should either piss him off cuz hes being shown up by his own hikari or proud ya know that sorta thing and maybe a lil bit more *wink*well theres my idea if u want to go on with it go right ahead but id like it if u centered it kinda on the Hikar/Yami grp ok well gtg now JA NE ^__^
person ToonMistress
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o Seto... Mokuba....?
HM: Oh jeez. She's read those fics.
*evil glare and huggles her Mokuba plushie, hair of plushie made with real Mokuba hair no one ask how she managed that* Mokuba's mine!
HM: Honey. Think about it. You've read fics with the pairing before. You even said that one was extremely hot.
.... Oh yeah. That one that was so well written with Mokuba and Seto..... *drools whil remembering* Incest fic! Incest fic!
HM: You have her vote.
person hidy
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can u finish this?
person Yamima
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING! NOW WHAT!?
person ToonMistress
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gomen nasai!!!! I haven't been reveiwing because I was so into some Zelda fics that I started reading!
*whimpers* Yugioh yaoi or Zelda yaoi? The thought of Seto and Joey together, or the thought of Japas and Mikau together? Such a hard decision! But I still like the fic! You must continue!
person Red Dragon Of Egyp
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD:hey red here nice ficcy so far even though im not too overly fond of pegasas i found somone i hate even more then him so i can tolerate him now but i CANT STAND THAT BASTARD DARTS I HATE HIM sry didnt mean to shout hehe and naughty seto reading porno mags hehehe who would have guessed but everyone has a secret or two they keep tucked away dont they hehe and you know for the song thing i think you should have yami sing eihter Son Of Man for yugi by Phil Collins or um Desert Rose by Sting to heat things up *wink* catch on heheh and im not critizizing so dont go all spasin out on me its just a meer suggestion nothing more now keep up the great work hehe and update soon and yami better notice his hikari has fainted otherwise HIS SRY ASS IS MINE I TELL YOU hehe gtg now JA NE ^__^
person nicky
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thank you for the upcoming seto/jou scene!!!!! *kisses both of you*
And good luck for your tests!
Let's see what happens next! ^^
person Raccoon-chan
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o!!! Update!! This is really funny! Especially when Seto and Jou were giving each other footmassages! XDDDD I laughed. Hard. Well, do update, nyo~! Arigatou!
person Terry
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great song! I heart Bakura so much! Yes update more cause I wanna see how you write lemons! Great chapter!