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for Sleepover

by lemontree

person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: you know its funny but my friend said i should watch Gravitation to onna count i love Yaoi but as much as i liked it and i like ny yaoi couple id have to say my main favs revolve round the yamis and hikaris sorry YL its not that ur lemon wasnt that good and i dont like Yaoi or anything its just that well i sort of lean more towards the yamis and hikaris i just like those couplings more then anything else im sure u can understand but if u did a yami and hikari lemon any one of them im sure itd be good hehe well keep up the great work and update soon hehe and that part were yugi gave them lube and a condom DAM that was funny and totaly unexpected hehe I LOVED IT hehehe so pls update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
person Terry
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE THE NICEST FIC WRITER EVER :) THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!
person Yaoi_Rox_Me_Sox
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey again! please please please please please please PLEASE write the next chapter. PLEASE!!! i love this story muchly. ^________^
person anidark
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rotfl...hey that was real gooood and hey i'm dutch too anywayz i realy like the story
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD:hehe that was a lil funny but a weee bit corny to but funny none the less i guess anyways keep up the great work and im hoping you took my idea into acount if u dont its ok its totally up to you after all there your fics arent they well again keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
person nicky
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhm... first of all soooooorry for not reviewing yesterday... I was at my grandparent's place... so, no internet.
But'll review twice, once for each chapter :D
about chapter ten: yay, I liked that reading part... and it's funny how they were all engulfed in their littly sexual fantasies/adventures and then suddenly bored again, hehe
person nicky again
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes...
Good Seto! Good Joey! ^^
I want that lemon! *jumps around*

say... what exactly is peggy doing with that bottle? *grins*

person caca
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is in my "top 5" of the worst stories.
stupid and bad written.
this sucks
person Death over Time
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoop!!! I love sleepovers, manga, Truth or Dare, and Karaoke!!! *applauds, then realizes is applauding a pc and brother probably think is insane*
person Yaoi_Rox_Me_Sox
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY!! this story is very very fun!! *gasping because of lack of air due to laughing* hehe. i love your pairings. especially Seto x Joey and Yami x Yugi.
also, i would LOVE to read that seto x mokuba story. i love incest!! ^______^
please write more soon!