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for Sleepover

by lemontree

person ToonMistress
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I feel so special!! I was added to Yami Loezzy's MSN list! *glee* I'm also on AIM, I'm on there more often due to my MSN loving to kill itself on me! *looks rabid*
HM: Oh jeez. Now she's on a killing spree. *runs to go get chocolate*
*look violent then reads the part with Pegasus and Marik looking for the naked little boys again* ..... *giggles* Oya oya Pegasus. You never cease to amaze me. Anyway. My AIM is cyta27 if you have it, you can grab me on there sometime. More Yaoi! More Pegasus!
HM: *hands TM chocolate* I'd be happier if Harpy Lady, Mai, and Dark Magaician Girl were in the story. *avoids a glare from TM and holds up Gourry Gabriev from Slayers*
O.O ...... *drops the chocolate and tackles Gourry before ripping his clothes off* WH00T!!!!! NAKED GOURRYNESS!!!!!
HM: Ummm..... She'll be busy for quite some time. Maybe she'll be ready to read the next update.
*loud moaning can be heard*
HM: >.< Toon! I'm your boyfriend and you'd rather sleep with him?!
You've had your chances. Ooh! Gourry! You've got some talent with those sword weilding hands!
HM: *sighs* Well, I apologize for her.
person nicky
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cuuuuute...
Yeah... give us that last chapter! pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!
person roby-chan
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is such a cool story ^^ I love all the chapters, I hope you will update soon =3
person anidark
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and again...i really liked it and think it's funny...(i really suck writing reviews gomen -_-')
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: hahaa u two are bothe crazy but ur stories are funny none the less although im a smudge distrurbed at what it took to wake marik up then again why would i be suprised in the least hes a maniacle tyrant who takes pride in being a moron if nothing else well gtg now keep up the great work and update soon JA NE ^__^
person Katie
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEST YORI STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!! Juset out of the back of my mind what is it like in Holland? Have you ever been to America? Lots of stupid questions I know but I am Scottish and Swedish by name only and I nknow or think (looks around the room scratching back of head) that they are all around the same place . Let me know we might have a lot in common. Katie
person anidark
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well...yeah...not bad...not bad at all for a first lemon ^^ i really liked it and it was funny too so goe gedaan would i say ^^ ...
person Naria
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you!! ^_^ Yeah...You can be my friends! My crazy, psychopathic, schitzoid friends...Anyhoo, I also want to congratulate you on your awesome taste!! ^_^ Aya IS perfect, isn't he? Don't you just want to tie him down and do obscene and lewd things to him?! OR Make him your clothing slave? And EXCELLENT choice on joining the Gravi fandom! ^_^ There are a few good ficcies about K and his um...forcefulness...here on AFF! My personal fave is called "Tastuha's Birthday" Oh yeah...BDSM and LOTS of shiny weapons!! *drool* KEEP WRITING! I DEMAND A BREAKFAST LEMON!!! LEEEEEMOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!! *froth *froth*
person nicky
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay Lemon!
I suddenly like Yugi a whole lot better, hehe (not that I didn't like him before)
Would have been fun to let someone be annoyed by seto and Jou's lovemaking and yell at them when they're done or so...
anyway. Thanks ^^*
person Yaoi_Rox_Me_Sox
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! not bad my friend. as far as lemens go. trust me, i've read worst...*shiver* anywho, GRAVITATION ROX!! anywho, very good. long live Seto x Joey!! *waves Seto x Joey flag*